A jewel that had long been hidden within the depths of the Castle of the Two Sisters, has been recovered by Twilight and Starlight because of their eagerness to study and learn all about it and the strange energies it gives off every now and again. While gathering the last of a few things to study the markings on the strange jewel, they unknowingly get a visit from Rainbow Dash who is then dragged into a strange world by the jewel. When Twilight and Starlight return to continue the studies, they soon learn of what has transpired in their absence. As the two of them gather all the help they can to try and bring Rainbow back into their world, Rainbow Dash soon learns that survival is much harder than Daring Do makes it out to be.
You have a reputation of having Rainbow Dash be killed off or die in most of your stories. I'm curious whether you will continue to follow that reputation with this story...
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I knew someone would bring that up lol
Why has this been added to Displaced, when it clearly is not a Displaced story?
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Patience you will see.
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Wait.... What world is she going? is she gonna meet other displaced?
Please don't kill Dash, i'm getting tired of seeing those fics.
As soon as the dream realm was mentioned, I thought of Luna.
Loredump
I feel like a profanity tag should be added since there’s a bit of strong language throughout the story.
Rainbow Dash: “But I was just there!”
Well looks like the story is either entering a new ark or just about to end and we still don’t have any explanation on how this is a displaced fic.
That would be scary to see what Dashie would do to other creatures now that she’s back.
The chapter was awesome,but I can't shake the feeling that it was written too fast. It seems weird that that's the level of concern they would have for Rainbow Dash, after she lost her leg, eye and gained severe injuries. They just asked her some questions and left her to sleep. It sort of loses the horror atmosphere it had. But nevertheless it's still an amazing chapter and an interesting story idea. Hope to see more of it.
Hope Rainbow Dash does alright w/Discord.
a sequel
a sequel
a sequel
Dude, this is pretty decent so far, though all the typos are bugging me, causing me to reread a few sentences multiple times, but otherwise this is pretty good
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Glad you like it. Can't wait to hear what you think when you finish it
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thanks
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I agree