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Gingka is transported to equestria accidentally,as he tries to get home a evil grows to challenge gingka and his friends. Gingka will have to find a way home and meet some familiar people along the way 3 2 1 Let It Rip
(Never Will Do A Beyblade Burst Fic Sorry I just don't like it)
This is my first story so sorry for any spelling errors I am new to this
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You know, in my opinion, Beyblade jumped the shark the hardest. When it got to evil top gods, I was just done.
We'll at least it put up a Challage for them
I was trying to be funny
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I would have replied if you had replied to me. My point was, Beyblade went off the deep end, HARD. The whole evil top god thing was the epitome of stupid, when they could have just ganged up on the guy and kicked his ass so he couldn't use it.
I am in control happy Halloween
I'll agree with that they could of just left
But they had to because of plot
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I agree they could of just left and it would have been over
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I'm really loving this story so far I can't wait for you to upload more chapters for this story please upload as soon as u can I'll be waiting. 3...2...1 Let It Rip
Follow me in my YouTube channel Doctortale
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Working on Chapter 5 and a Halloween Story you guys and girls
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this story needs a lot of work. it has a bunch of simple, but crucial, mistakes. other than those it's a good concept it just feels forced as well. i would look for an editor or proofreader
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this chapter is better, less punctuation errors that make it look wrong and more just spelling errors
this sentence should not exit even if you meant times four it should be written out not 4x, if she didn't mean times four it should still be written out "wait wait wait wait" not "wait x4" also that she says is not needed. anyways still the same stuff need to work on punctuation and get a proofreader
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Awesome DP can't wait till u upload them when ur done
Me encanto continua por favor se muy interesante
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I understand but I'm my hand it didn't make sense to make it that way
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you don't even read over short comments for mistakes!! otherwise you would have seen that hand was supposed to be head!! this is why you need a proofreader they give you a second opinion
If I was to write this again Kenta would have been revealed in chapter 6
Sneak peek on my Twitter @Doctor_Tale Follow me on my YouTube Channel where I do gaming videos YouTube DoctorTale
Amazed yet
Working on next chapter I been giving hints of the next beyblade character reveal can you guess who it is
I have to ask you a question do you want the Halloween story yes or no because I spent 2 hours on it
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New chapter
I don't know who the boy is but I really like the story alot please upload more chapters as soon as u can I'll be waiting my friend, but until then 3...2...1 Let It Rip!
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Follow me and get book mark it so you can track when a chapter comes out ponylover and subscribe to my YouTube DoctorTale,DoctorPony
And check my blogs
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And follow me one twitter @Doctor_Tale
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I did on both you tube and Twitter I'll be waiting for the next chapter doctor pony and keep me posted
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OK now follow me on YouTube DoctorPony Where i talk about this and my New Twitter DoctorPony
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I already did
I know I was trying to say that I'll be posting sneak peeks on my Twitter than it glitches so I know you did sorry about that and the next chapter is called the babysitting
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Just letting you know my twitter is @Doctorpony2
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I just did thanks
Ok, first, dialogue, really need to improve that.
It's my first chapter I have ever wrote so yea I'll leave it like this to show how the writing evolves
Red for incorrect green for correction.
“Go Pagasus,” says Gingka,
Force Wall,” said
sKyoka.“Pegasus Smash Mode,(no space)” saids
Statium.
good battle,” said
s“As good as ever,” said
sI gotta go to bed now I’ll check the rest tomorrow.
IT
I am really liking this story so far keep up the good work
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Glad that you enjoy it
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I like the story so far but I still don't know who is the master is? So I can't wait for your next chapter 👍😊😃😎
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Well neptrillo I would recommend reading the story of the Doctor, the night the doctor lose control to understand the character of the master
No not pennywise anything other than IT
I’m addicted to Beyblade.
Nice I love Sagattario
Noice
Holy shit a STALKER.
You spelled Kyoya wrong.
You also spelled Sagittario wrong.
Name: Pennywise/IT
Species: Unknown
Favorite Food: Children full of fear
Weakness: Being talked down to