Take Time To Spread A Little Magic! 🪄✨️
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Huh, grammar was good, story flowed neatly, hint of a sequel. Why does this not have a few likes?
You gotta be careful when using the "you" pronoun. Using that word makes the reader think of themselves when the character is mentioned. And they better like what they're being put in or portrayed as or you're out of luck. I'm guessing most people reading this won't be masochists, and this story wasn't really that funny. I think you should add more humor to this story. And maybe work up to the whole Rarity dominatrix a bit more. You don't have to get to this part immediately. Rarity is a popular character, so she should act a bit more like herself and get the audience more comfortable with your Rarity before you get to that part.
~Good luck
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Well I'm limiting myself to like 1.5 ishk words for this series, supposed to be a quick morning one shots.
That and it is rated M, also I did add in the description all the kinks in it, so if they do read and are like "Well golly that came out of nowhere!" Then they might be a bit blind or drunk like me.
I also wasn't going for Ha-ha funny more of a cringe funny. But hay! I'm also one of the dryest peole on earth, so comedy might escape me forever!
~Falls onto a fainting couch.~
This series will be from all walks of life, Fluttershy's was more of a drama, Rarity got Kinks, My next Aj Is more of the comedy you might be searching for. More like the stuff you'd find in a E rated story.
But thank you for the input! I wrote this baby a bit buzzed last night, but i stand beside it! Like a mother who just saw her child ruin the school play by forgetting all her lines and then wetting herself!- My gawd I'll still stand up and say!
"Yes! I created that child who just scorned the world! and i'm proud of it!"
Will there be a sequel perchance?
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Every Fic in "The Awoken" Series will have a Sequel, but first I will post the first part's for the rest of the mane six.
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Not even five minutes in and I'm about to die of laughter. This is why I'm afraid to get into that sort of thing.
This, friends, is why you establish a safe word.
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Anyone know of an entire series like this? Or maybe theres a sequal planned?
I stopped at the point where the lil sister came in. I would had kill Rarity right in front of her lil sister, badly! 👎
made me laugh that's all I got to say