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Superb. I love the way you described Palette's magic and the way she views the world. It's quite poetic at times and differentiates itself nicely from the previous story. Her interactions with Iris were nuanced and fun to read. I hope to see more of Iris' group in the future!
Well, that was a downer of an ending. The sense of futility really mounted effectively as the chapter went on.