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Memequail


I love pony smut

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I like this kind of story's so you have my like.

Shocks #2 · Jul 7th, 2017 · · 1 ·

standards continue to plummet

You just copied SomethingEmoAndEdgy, how sad.

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I remember when authors wrote good, quality fiction on this site. Standards used to be above and beyond the call of duty to produce excellent pieces of literary art. Now, we log in and find tarnished refuse like this staining the once proud name of this website.

How dare one produce fiction of this nature?!

Yeah, if ur gonna do a vore story? This inst the way to ďo it. Its the act of consuming another thats the actual fetish, this is just sad. Read a few vore stories on other sites, learn what works and what doesnt, then, maybe, u can try this again

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W A L L S T R E E T M A R K E T P L U M M E T S

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You can produce anything you whant as long as its not racial descrimination and it has ponies in it.

Ps: And its not stolen.

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How would you know it's not stolen if you're not the author, tho

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I ment that you dont post other peopels story's with your permission.

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call of duty

1v1 me on rust, kid.

WOW I LOVED THE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY FAV PART IS THIS: "Lick my pussy Spike make me feel good to". As she shoves Spikes cock down her throat Spike licks her pussy and as Applebloom moans it vibrates Spikes cock sending wave after wave of pleasure he quickly cums inside Appleblooms mouth but continues to lick her pussy she lifts her head and screams in pleasure.
As he removes his tongue from Applebloom his mouth begins to envelope Applebloom from the flank and slowly asending up her body inch by inch.

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Hey, we still got a lot of good fics in

Well I was going to read this but then I looked in the comments sooooooo...
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well at the very least the mares are going die after feeling the most pleasure they can:applejackconfused:

The title remind me of a video

The whole vore part ended in one sentence that was the biggest downfall for me. Beside this lack of anything like descriptions. The whole story is basically AB moaning from start to finish without any consistence. Its not bad for a 1st attempt but it can be improved on a lot. (plus i'm not so fond of the whole willing vore but at least this was something understandable for AB)

somehow I could not avoid imagining everything as text-to-speech

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