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A setting after "The Perfect Pear". Starlight's been thinking about how her parents have been gone. Applejack comforts her by telling her about her parents. Starlight's been learning spells on how to bring ponies back, so she goes to her parents' graves and brings them back to life.

An entry for the Everfree Northwest Scribblefest 2018

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Comments ( 18 )

What a beautiful ending.

Now Applejack, Apple Bloom, and Big Mac got their parents back and Starlight became a new member of the Apple Family, thing is about to get interesting.

Isn't that Necromancy?

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What's that supposed to mean?

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Doesn't make it wrong. I have seen just as many sources making it out to be a good thing.

Now you got be all sappy!!!!

How about a continuation?!?

Who was the green stallion in the straw hat?

Don't none can cross over the edge it will take all your enegy and kill you. Riders Elves Magiscians all have tried and all have failed: Brom

9438216 Well, do you know in some stories, writers create original characters? That's just a stallion I made up.

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I figured. And I know that. I just thought the character sounded like a character actually in the show.

Will there be a sequel of this story

Like a few others have said will there be a sequel to this I really thought this was a really good story just hope that there would be a sequel maybe one when Sugar Belle became a part of the apple family (just saying).

Oh... the feels!!!

I almost cried on this one. So beautiful!

Very nicely done.

"I just didn't want to intrude." Starlight said. "Also, it made me think of my parents. They're dead too."

I guess that makes sense to make it as a alternate universe story because this was during the time before Starlight and sunburst meeting up with parents starlight's father and Sunburst mother

Starlight's heartbeat increased and felt a nervous tingle in her stomach. She took a deep breath and let it all out. "They were murdered by a criminal stallion, he deceased them right in front of me, and I was just four." she said.

Oh jeez

Well I got to say this was a pretty sweet story here and I had to admit I really want to see them alive as well because so ponies and creatures know who they are and it's always nice to see reunions like that this was a pretty good one keep up the good work

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