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lightningman


DA FUCK YOU DOING ON MY LAWN YOU LITTLE BASTARDS! WHY.... fans? well anything is possible

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This story is a sequel to The True Me


Once Lightningman gets home, his brother is sent to canterlot high. Where he is joined by people that remind him a lot of some other people he knows about. He has to try and keep secrets from them. Why does he keep his face covered?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 48 )

I feel like this needs a re-write...And a continuation! I need to read this!

8717996 i know. but i wanted to wait til the true me is over. but i will rewrite these chapters and add a few new ones

8718591
I'm guessing that's going to take a long time...

8718658
Nope, I rewrote the end of chapter 2 already. I just need to continue on the same plotline as usual.

8718760
Ah. I'm still on the earlier chapters, so I wouldn't know. :twilightblush:

8718845
I just finished chapter three. And my next chapter. Guess what I'm gonna do to Xayvier?

8718855
Hm...Be mysterious but the one guy with common sense?

Okay. One problem that bothered me a little. Didn't ruin the story itself, but it still needs addressing

Multiple times this happened: "convinceeveryonehere" Notice the problem? They still should be separated. I get what you're trying to do, but that isn't how you should it.

But other than that, there isn't any other problem to be honest. Well, not to me at least. It was a little rushed here and there but nothing to excessive. Like how I rushed some things.

So...Yeah, that's all I have to say.

Um...Okay...If that's how a parent would react then they are a terrible parent...

8718949
I know, but it's the worst case scenario.

8718963
Also, I'm thinking of making this a love story between pinkie and Xayvier. how do you think that would work out?

8718964
Hm...Not sure...It would be pretty entertaining seeing someone like Xavier like Pinkie Pie. I'm guessing he would keep it a secret, only leaving little hints. I doubt he would be the guy to show it.

But not sure how Pinkie would react...

8719013
(It's pinkie that kinda starts it. They grow to like each other. Just... read the latest chapter that i'll upload today and you'll see. Sombra makes an appearance. Funny as hell.

This is easily the funniest thing I have ever read.

Ya' know. Usual day for me.
-Voidic

8721480
pretty much. xayvier already took care of some crimes before he became voidic

8721692
Of course he did...At least he didn't use his sword...*Deadpool flashback*...Never again...

8718935
dont blame me, blame the equestria girls transcript

8722025
*deadpool flash back again*

I think I'd rather thank it...

8723490
I had to use it because it was much faster.

What do you mean by possess other people to follow the girl? Is he body jumping? Then what is going on with his body?

8960074
It's a power called possession, your body turns into a mist that enters the body of your victim and your consciousness controls the victim's body, Then when your finished or your power runs out, you get ejected out of the body and reform into your own body.

8960519
Oh that makes much more sense. I was thinking of Naruto when that blond girl does mind possession jutsu.

8960639
I have never watched naruto nor will i ever will.

8960715
It's not a bad anime but a lot of people hate on it when they haven't seen much of it

8960723
I just don't want to not because it's a bad anime, it's because someone i really don't like watches it.

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Probably, but Xayvier never claimed or even aimed to be a saint. he aimed to get shit done.

9714216
he has shadow walk and possession. you really think any prison can hold him?

9498571
Well, Voidic and Xayvier are technically nicknames. His full name is Deklan 'Xayvier' 'Voidic' Malik Chapman.

9498574
I actually based sombra off of a story that proofread a chapter for. It's an octascratch story called 'Silent Love'
Also, the woman that Xayvier saved, I don't really have any future plans for her in the future stories.

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