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pabrony


A broke(n) artist and writer.

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This story is a sequel to Friendship is Forever


(More of a concurrent side story rather than a sequel)

Twilight Sparkle, distraught by the death of Rainbow Dash, begins to bend new laws made by Celestia to benefit the remaining Elements of Harmony and the rest of Ponyville.


A side story explaining how Twilight and Celestia's relationship became strained; briefly alluded to in the last chapter of Friendship is Forever. It is highly recommended that Friendship is Forever be read before this.

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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

oohhh I like it, interesting

8335378 Thanks. If you get chance, check out the main story (Friendship is Forever) that this will eventually merge with.

Well, here's the start of the tension build-up. All the way back then.

First, Sunset passed then Rainbow. And the bitterness steadily grows. And will grow more with the passing of each of her friends.
Quick question: Will Twilight see Sunset in the afterlife, even though Sunset died a human?

8343980 Actually Rainbow died before Sunset. If you remember back to Friendship is Forever Sunset showed up at the hospital to read Thunder Dash's memory before Rainbow died. And to answer your second question I hadn't given any thought to that but probably not so that it would add to Twilight's bitterness.

Well... damn. We know the relationship between Twilight and Celestia became strained but what about her relationship with the other two princesses?

8476621 That's what the nightmare was setting up.

Well, any Flash Sentry x Twilight relationships lose 5 points for me, so...

89/100 so far. :)

8477808 I'm not a big Flash x Twilight shipper myself but I already had three OC's in Friendship is Forever before the end of the first chapter and I still had a lot more to go. That and Sunset was living in the human realm, so... :twilightsheepish:

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Understandable. Just saying, I hate that ship with a burning passion. ****. THAT. SHIP.

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****. THAT. SHIP.

Lol. :rainbowlaugh:

Yea! An update!
*reads chapter*
Ouch.
Celestia is going to have guards posted, isn't she?

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Celestia is going to have guards posted, isn't she?

Not yet but more than likely sometime down the road.

Whoo. Yeah, I can see how this chapter would be difficult to write while depressed.


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Could they even stop her?

8901096 Who knows? Of course, Twilight is on an unofficial "Friendship mission" in the next chapter. So they're safe for the moment. :trollestia:

I hate to make such a mention in a chapter with such a heavy ending, but I get the feeling that the something that happened between Sunset and the Twilights involved a lot of booze, mistaken identities, and accidental discharge.

8912379 I don't know about any booze being involved but the plot hole was intentional to set up a possible one-shot when I get a chance. :pinkiehappy:

“Listen, the only reason I'm letting you in here is that my wife wanted to tell everyone something at once,” SciTwi said. “If it wasn't for her, I would've done everything in my power to make sure that you wouldn't be able to terrorize this world anymore.”

“Twilight, I'm sorry for what happened between the three of us twenty-two years ago. If I could reverse time to change it, I would. Sunset needs all of us right now and I think it would be best for us to bury the hatchet, so to speak,” Princess Twilight told her doppelganger.

What happened twenty-two years ago?

Waaaaait a minute.
In Rainbow's End, you said that Sunset died before Rainbow. Now, Twilight is trying to deal with Rainbow's death while going to visit Sunset in this chapter. Which is it?

8913496 Rainbow died before Sunset. In Friendship Is Forever, the chapter The End Of The Rainbow Sunset returned to Equestria to read Thunder Dash's memories of Rainbow's accident. You gotta keep in mind that this takes place during the events of Friendship Is Forever.

I'll look into rewriting Rainbow's End so it isn't quite as confusing.


8913455 Haven't decided on making this a flashback or a one-shot side story.

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