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Mochas Dungeon
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Well, that was fucked up. I suppose you did your job.
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Thanks!
You should drop a like, cuz it was what it was supposed to be.
Oh shit, it's published! I hope I was of help.
I'm gonna wake up tomorrow and read this again, I'm sure of it.
Ladies and gentlemen, we have found a new Cupcakes, only better written (aside from a couple of typos) and somehow even more fucked up. Do I even want to know how or why you came up with this?
I don't really know what to say. This story was indescribably horrible, but not bad. I am therefore reluctantly upvoting, as it clearly does what it set out to do.
I have the strangest hard on yet with this.
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I can write a better one, I just wanted to get this off my... chest.
accidental pun.
I just start with a word or sentance and let the story flow, so I have no idea what's going to happen until it's done. Just my subconscious venting, I guess.
I'll start thinking of stuff, maybe I'll write another.
Thanks for the comment!
8058128 - Speaking of accidental puns, I just noticed you tagged this "Slice of Life". Never before has that tag been so wrong yet so perfectly, literally, apt.
And I thought my subconscious was messed up. But hey, you do you.
I AM SO CONFUSED!!!!
I AM SO CONFUSED!!!!
I was not ready for this. Like, damn that was beautifully fucked up...
And Discord kills him
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Why?
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This stallion brings chaos, he'll live.
8058486 Thanks!
I thought it was kinda light, tbh.
To protect fluttershy
Everyday we stray further from god
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She'll be last...
Mwahahaha
well this seems like a risky click... better do some investigating first.
hmm... k we got a gore tag... a red lightsaber....
prolly not too bad, and down vote bots.
well ill just read the desc...
hmm... interesting...
use of a trope...
lets see.... first two lines of text....
hmm... yep somethings off here...
prolly a bloodborne crossover, and forgot the crossover tag...
.... hmm lets glance at the comments...
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well...
he seemed to like it...
its posted in both rape murder and brutal rape.
big red flag here but...
its prolly the victim killing the rapist.
yeah i guess ill give it a go, it only 2-3k words.
after reading it it turns out to be a cupcakes ripoff, only more fucked up.
-99999999999999999 Karma
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You are now infamous.
10/10 would fap again.
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The only issue I have, is this isn't a cupcakes tale.
Just because that story exists, every story I write with Gore, has to be related to that darn story.
I'm gonna write a story so epically awesome, that Pinkamena would wince!
Thanks for the comment!
Infamous is awesome, too.
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Well its prolly compared since both storys involve takeing out the victim's organs with a knife. except this one has Ræp.
is... is that possible?
and your welcome for the comment.
inFAMOUS is de best god damn game i hav evar fucing played in my worthless fukin life and i will sell my soul to suckerpunch for a fourth game.
Eh... it's alright, but at least I can see why it has so many downvotes.
Overall, it feels very... tone deaf. In the pre-gore scenes, there's a complete lack of tension since the first few lines reveal a pretty good idea of what is going to happen. During the "main event", we cut rapidly between the descriptions of the dissection and descriptions of his sexual acts. The problem is, while the first is written in semi-technical terminology, the latter is written with common vernacular and slang. The rapid shifting between the two kills the potential for either mood to control the scene, leaving the reader unsure what to feel. Even then, within the technical descriptions the terminology ranges from "I cut her lengthwise and then vertically, only a centimeter deep" to "cutting at her spine bones".
In short, this is a story where we the readers should feel a lot of passion. The passion of his lovemaking, his passion for blood, his relishing in the pleasure of committing the taboo. But it's just not there. The mood is poorly directed, leaving us confused and unsatisfied. Are we meant to be aroused? Disgusted? Impassioned? We can't tell.
Edit: As well as a mention to the final cutscene. It was so irrelevant to the story that I skipped over it entirely in my first read without even realizing. What does it matter that it was her specifically? If he had made constant hints throughout, such as comparing the sensations and feelings to candies or baked goods, then it might make some degree of sense. Personally, I think it's be better to utilize that otherwise irrelevant "Original Character" tag and leave her anonymous.
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Because this was a test, now I can do sequels.
I came back tonight to read this again because... I wanted to read it again, and that like/dislike ratio is spicy AF.
Does Fancy Pants appear in this story or not?
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Yes, he's the... Main character.
Protagonist doesn't seem right, but from his point of view I'm sure he's a good guy.
This story is a bit clunky, but it's a precursor to a longer story I was debating on writing.
I'm going to write it, and have already started.
Thanks for reading, the next one will be far better.
That...that was beautiful. *Slow claps*
I'm just going to Drop this link here
8078141 thank you...
The next Gore clop will be a real story.
Before I read this, what is the
Goreand Dark tag for ?And how bad does it get ?
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Idk, to me it's gorey and descriptive, but lacking in enough depth for me...
To some it's been compared to a shorter version 'cupcakes'.
Drugs, sex, murder, some guts.
I can't say how bad it is because it's up to the reader to decide.
8139688 Maybe you shod put it here
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/212106/muffin-side-stories
8139711 Thanks for tellling someone about my group!
Me: Hah, he thinks he can out crazy me!? WHO DOES HE THINK HE IS!?
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Okay, I just finished reading this and I have to say, it was a wonderfully dark story...
Although it wasn't exactly my cup o' tea. I felt like I was reading a story about Jack the Ripper (which, amusingly, I'm fascinated by unsolved crimes. So, I guess it should've been up my alley in a way?)
Eh, whatever. Want me to try to one-up this? Because... I can't say I've written anything as fucked up as it. I write comedy, not warped, dark sexual fantasy stories.
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😆
This isn't even my final form!
You want comedies, I've got a couple on my main account.
Tnx for the read tho!
This is a work of art. Love the sexy detail and POV.
Nice to see another writer put that much effort into a gore fic.
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The "sequel" will really make you happy then, it puts Cupcakes to bed with a lollipop in comparison... I do need to work a bit on a couple scenes that were lacking in detail, but hey, it was a rush job.
It's inspired by this, but a few levels better!
Thanks for the comment, btw!
😗
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Tsk. Cupcakes is too tame to even be worth mentioning.