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im semi ok with this

>no genre tags

HOW DID YOU PERFORM THIS BLACK MAGIC? PLEASE TELL ME, O ARCANE ONE, THINE SECRETS REGARDING THIS SORCERY! @~@

I LOVE IT, please for the love of Faust make a sequel to this story, maybe Chrysalis releases them later by shitting them out when she gets back to her castle or something like that.

This... was... AWESOME!! ^w^

I So hope there's gonna be more to this. ^.^

I would love to see a sequel of this.

Because this Is a fetish story, I have to play this

Where are all the genre tags?

8035844 Uh, nothing seemed especially appropriate?

WHY?!
Why do the vore fics with Luna as prey so VASTLY outnumber the ones where she's the pred?!

Lol "no officer she fell in I swears it!"

I'd love a collection of Chrysalis just getting into situations like this. No one ever dies but everyone is convinced she's out to gobble ponies. Or something like that.

Hah, serves Sunbutt right.

Since it's soft and nobody dies, I'm okay with that. I imagine her spitting them back out at some point.

Can you do more please like her eating the main six

That was remarkably sexy. Giving a girl a good tonguing before she sinks down to the depths. What a trooper.

and then chrysalis gets assassinated because plot reasons, the end

"Erm, well," muttered the guard, her voice wavering. Celestia smiled; inspiring fear in others put her back in her comfort zone. "There was a miscommunication with the princesses. They were told by their assistants to expect you tomorrow, and so today they are off doing, er, leisure activities. They're a bit difficult to reach at the moment, but once they are contacted, rest assured that they will drop everything to meet with you."

I am fairly certain you meant "Chrysalis" here.

Dear sister," said Luna, throwing off her covers and rising to her hooves, "We know that you have no willpower when it comes to cake. We would not attempt to prank you by 'spiking' it with something distasteful. There would be no sport in it."

Also, I think you meant to start this with a quotation mark.

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