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Beaten in her homeland, Hillary must take her forces to another dimension, specifically, to Equestria, to rebuild her faction of loyal feminists to take back America from the evil, corrupt Drumpf.

Join her on her journey to redeem her country and her kin.

Note: If you don't like the story, please dont leave mean comments.

Credit to THE PUNISHER for the cover art!! Thank you!!

EXTRA NOTE: THIS WILL BE AN AWESOME TRILOGY!

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Chapters (3)
Comments ( 242 )

7988809 i hoped you liked it!!

"It's your hill. I hope you enjoy dying on it."

Comment posted by Waterpear deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7988873 No mean comments please

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Comment posted by Shadow rift deleted Mar 1st, 2017

I think what you meant by 'saves' is 'deletes'

What even is this my dude



P.S think of the dislike as likes

Writing this probably gave you some form of cancer. Let me know which one!

More like Hillary Clinton Fucks Equestria Just Like She Tried to Fuck America. Crooked witch needs to be locked up.

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Comment posted by Lazy_ deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7988951 I think I have ahernia

7988940 its fine. I just delete the haters

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7988961 if you dont like it, dont read it!

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I never said I didn't like it. In fact I was laughing at it, I find this kind of thing funny.

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7988992 oh, i thought you were making fun of me

7988995
Nah, not at all. To be honest I got a similar reception when I first started writing, I learned that commenting hate was a pathetic thing to do from day one. If you wanna' say why you didn't like something, you say it in a respectful manner. The story's obviously not malicious in any way, so there's no reason to be hateful about it.

fuck shakespeare this is true talent

7988985 Well, I'll admit I'm not a fan, so no, I probably won't continue reading.

But I wasn't trying to be mean. I was pointing out the flaws I saw in the story, and trying to give you some constructive criticism. Perhaps a few of my remarks came across poorly, and I'm sorry about that, but they were simply my personal reactions to the story. Since it looks like you're planning to continue this, I was hoping you would take my comments into account as you go forward. I never discourage anyone from continuing a story, even one I don't like (and I'm still not downvoting this one).
As a writer, you should learn to embrace constructive criticism, not delete it. Some of the comments I didn't see were likely just distasteful, and I wouldn't blame you for deleting them if they were, but when someone is trying to give you constructive criticism—even while making it known that they didn't enjoy the story—I wouldn't dismiss them as a 'hater' and delete the comment. I'm not hating on you, I simply think that this could have been written better. Definitely watch the clip 7989071 just posted above me.

I probably won't comment again, so I wish you luck going forward.

7989099 Oh, I stick by my criticisms that were deleted, but I'll admit that remarks like "...No. Just... no." and "this looks like a response crack-fic to the 'Celestia is Replaced by Trump' fic" might have been a bit harsh.

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7989069

Don't apologize like a puss. Stick by what you say. Confidence is sexy, and a lack thereof is a turn off.

Comment posted by LILDASHIEGRINGO deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7989100 We'll see about that!!!


7989069 sorry then! Thought you were being a hater

:trollestia: the treasury is drained of all it's bits
:raritycry: Sweeties thinks she's a colt! and doesn't know what bathroom to use.
:rainbowhuh: damn it I'm not...........
:fluttercry: She's so loud and rude and Angel Bunnies has an RPG waiting for her
:pinkiegasp: It's the Nutzi Party run for the rock farm!
:ajbemused: Ma dogs pregnant, Which one of you hippies did it?
:moustache: Dude that's your right to be FUBAR even if it's so messed up.
:duck: Spikey language please!
:facehoof: the comment section looks like her e-mails.....
:derpytongue2: good writing - nasty woman (apologies to real women)
:eeyup: she scares the apples outa me!
52 views and 58 downs 9 ups now how's that even possible ?:twilightoops:

Reminds me of a nondenominational joke. Princess Celestia was having problems coordinating her rule over the Principality of Equestria with her sister, Luna, so she called in the three greatest minds in American politics into her throne room to give her advice.

When Bernie was called forward, he scratched his chin for a while and said, "What you both need is to tear down Canterlot and go live among the common ponies, using all the money and resources that go into this city to help the poor and downtrodden."

Well, that sounded a little extreme, and there really were not that many poor and downtrodden ponies to help anymore due to her benevolent leadership over the many centuries, so she turned to the next politician.

Donald Trump pushed forward, looking around with a frown. "For starters, you need to redecorate this dump. It's really sad. Put some solid gold pillars over there, some diamond floor tiles, and a huge sign across the front with your name on it. Plus the real estate market in the city is stagnant. You need some casinos and hotels to bring in the high-rollers, with some real quality chefs for the buffet. I've got a few names in mind, and I can start tomorrow if you give me the word."

Since Canterlot already had far too many rich and stuck-up ponies for her taste, and most of the diamond floor tiles were going into the renovation of the Crystal Empire castle anyway, Celestia just shook her head and turned to the third politician.

Hillary Clinton walked up to Celestia and pointed. "You're sitting in my chair, bitch."

7989163 Those are fighting words

7989174 I like the joke! It made me gaffaw!

This is a story about politics not going to get many love and friendship form would be readers

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7989229 Stop harrassing me or Ill call the admins on ypu and block you

7989220 ill call in the 4th reich on u. Theyll git you real good

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7989237 if you havent even red the story, dont comment

Comment posted by Regis-Th3-Lesser deleted Mar 1st, 2017

7989204 sadly Woona has no little picture thingy :pinkiegasp:


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:unsuresweetie: they have the CMC but no Woona

:twistnerd: But they have me!

:applecry: You're no Woona

I knew the turnout for this story.

Again,

7989256 WHAT... LETS MESSAGE KNIGHTY

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