A man is sent to a strange world as a shapeshifter after failing to listen to the internet. He does his best to make the most out of his new life. Although there are some who just can't leave well enough alone.
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Crossovers eh? What about a dishonored crossover?
Yep. Celestia is majorly out of character here. But, I'm guessing there's a reason for it that'll be explained later.
Also, seems you didn't explain much of how some of the new characters look from this chapter. Probably best to work on that as ya go.
Lastly... I see his plans with the tokens not working as intended. He think that they're summoned to him, by how he responded there. He didn't realize that he gets summoned to them. And only those Displaced that have had experience in being summoned gain gradual control over that, from all I've read.
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7795479 how does one do that?
7796504 Simply
7795479 Could you post that again without the eldrich font? I got "has heard your request and summons you Jekyll"
7794979 I'll fix the description issue as soon as I'm around a working computer and some WiFi, right now I'm working off of my phone.
As for the Celestia thing, I'm sorry but you're going to have past the fact that she's my main antagonist. I get where you're coming from, I didn't like the way Luna was portrayed in "Diaries of a Madman." It's just one of those things that comes with having different writers working with the same characters.
7797660 Don't get me wrong. I understand that she's different in his timeline. I accept that. I'm just wondering WHY she became as horrible as she is in this story. Like, what caused her to change in the past to become the way she is in his timeline?
7797660 YITH'NYGH'ELEYH
7797668 Oh, I see, sorry about that. I'm actually basing her on both my glass half empty impression of her from the show and irl dictators (psychology wise). It has to do with the origin story I've cooked up for her and Luna. I'll explain the exact details in a later chapter, in the meantime I'd recommend listening to Caroulus Rex by Sabaton for a taste.
7797752 Google didn't give me anything, so I'm assuming that's Cthulhu's second cousin. That would be an interesting matchup, I'm probably going to spend the next hour going Death Battle on this. If thats a line on a crossover, send me the link I'll see if it would be a good fit.
7794852 That would be interesting, do you have one in mind?
7798018 well I tried writing one, turned out horrible....
7797998 I'll just wait for it in the story then, since you plan to reveal it eventually.^^
I wouldn't mind getting my shit wrecked by a massive army! (As soon as I can get some writing done...)
7798451 It's going to be about 3 weeks until I can get back to work. I'll read through as much as I can on my phone in the meantime and get back to you.
7798108 How? Corvo is as close to a perfect displaced character as you can get, I messed up with this one and had to figure out how to counter the sheer level of overpoweredness I had set up for Jekyll. You should have seen my face when that realization hit after chapter three. I've gotten a ton of support from the community and would love to pass it on, I'd be more than happy to help you if you want to give it another shot.
7809396 tried using my OC as well........ that's how, that and it wasn't exactly thought through enough
7809402 The timberwolf? That could make an interesting duo. I understand what you mean, I hadn't thought out the first chapter of Monster either and we all know how terrible it turned out.
7809418 no I mean my old OC from a story that I deleted on Fanfiction.net, due to the negativity oming from it.....
7809490 I'm a little drunk, so don't take me too seriously.
I think you should give it another shot. Screw those guys who were hating on you before. This is fimfiction, where the community is so much more supportive. Might be good idea to leave out characters from other stories though, just for simplicity.
7822039 good idea
Is that supposed to mean something?
8785448
NOBODY SAY ANYTHING
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Hmmmm to ruin, or not to ruin...
Definitely a bad influence on Luna. :D
And that's the best kind of influence, isn't it?
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I suppose it's been long enough. Are you ready for the bees and the... um, actually, just the bees I suppose, in this particular case...
Ones this story is complet i print it out. Need a hard copy of the for the future