Coming to as if he was only just created and fleeing dangerous foes without a single scrap of knowledge as to who, what, or even why he is, a single griffon races to find answers. He does well in finding somepony interested in helping him and finding out exactly what is wrong. He just never expected it to be royalty. His life being empty, save for a princess or two hoping in and trying to assist alleviating his pain. He fills the terrible dark gap in his soul any way he can, which gets him in trouble in more than one way.
Special thanks to Tathem Relag and Earl for their masterful editing and proof reading.
The art provided was by amazing artists Nick Valentine and Earl from Equestrian Amino.
(Please note that this story varies lightly from canon. The story does not feature known characters like Starlight Glimmer or Thorax, additionally, events in the story imply noncanon things like Changelings being incapable of turning into skittlebugs, and some minor headcanon on a few various topics.)
You've done a good job of building up the suspense in this. I can't wait to read what happens in the story next. Keep up the good work with everything.
7634520 >w< yey.
It is a shade or two dark, but it has some really good stuff in it. I hope to amaze and inspire ^w^ all who read it
7634522 You are doing a great job. So I am sure you will.
Many questions I'm hoping for answers to.
7637797 that is the fun with a mystery
So many questions, and as you go along every question leads into another that slowly begins to seal the canopy of answers above you until you can see clearly what is going on... and who he is OwO
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Actually, this chapter has left me empty with questions. I'll be reading it regardless.
7638120 well please do stay tuned. ^_^ The plot of the story is VERY in depth
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I'll hold ya to that!
7638222 and I shall not disappoint ^_^
Will definitely stay tuned. Still trying to figure out who he is for roleplay xD
Dang, this is good. I can't wait to read more.
~Melly~
8121104 Thank ye ^w^
Chapter five is complete, its just waiting its art and the editing ^w^
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Awesome.
~Melly~
Lel, that Tyrin/Luna relationship tho.
But yes, I'm very interested to see where this goes. Though I sort of already do, since you had shared ideas for the story when you were first coming up with it. Still, can't wait for the next chapter!
~Melly~
This looks like it could be interesting
No... not replaced... all those doors... all those weak, rusted and damaged doors, with memories, with minds, with souls, behind them... and that one single, big and powerful door... shit, possession , a strong and powerful body for a strong a powerful mind that crushes/subjugates the body's mind and takes control of it, Order magic could take on a mind of its own after all (if i understood it right)
Yeah, i am guessing something along the lines of possession or reincarnation through Order magic
I hate it 😚
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Fite me boi!
This is not gonna end well
You're disappointed, in someone acting like a father to protect someone they hold dear ? you're being quite the hypocrite there miss "Will do anything to protect her nation"
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^_^ yes.. it was tricky to write, but people have to do these sort of mental gymnastics in order to justify their actions. If she didn't double down and bare her teeth so to speak, she would probably succumb to her pain of having to resort back to lethal combat which is not too common in the land of friendship rainbows and puppies...
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.... So if Equestria was a land of kittens, it would have been fine
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LOL XD
and rainbows and lolipops and puppies...
Iknew it! I knew it was latin!
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I think it's a combination of both, kind of like a chosen one deal.
Pleaz moaaaaar!
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^_^ Happy you like it so much...
Don't worry, there will be more, I'm just working on another story at the moment... you might like it, it does technically have Tyrin in it if that works for you... however, he's not nearly as nice...
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I'll have to try it, but one of the things I like about this story is how an enemy group has used Celestia's protective instincts to unleash a monster. After all only an idiot or some one who, is blinded by their own thoughts wouldn't be able to recognize anmemotional anchor when they see one.
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^w^ Chapter ten is up.
So many fantastic points
You practically raised Twilight to fullfille that so called "fate".
And no, you didn't have to follow it, you chose to follow it.
I don't know, you might get some unexpected help
So is the next update coming in three days then?
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I wish, I can Pump It Up in that time but it would have nearly be as high of quality.
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I'm always happy to see if my readers are smart enough to pick through these kind of things. ^_^
Why is celestia such a generally terrible individual in this story?
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She's not, there are things that a leader has to do. Those choices aren't always easy. She is making the choices based on our experience and based upon what she feels she has to do. She's not necessarily a bad person... She just has to make tough decisions that no one wants to. And while she doesn't have all of the information, she is a little bit redeemed at the end. She makes peace with it and even willingly sort things out with Iris refusing to pursue her as a changeling.
Loved this line
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XD Lol I think a LOT of people can relate to his joy, even at the cost XD
gah! da diabetus! to cute!
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only the snuggliest ^w^
The greatest perfect ending. Well done, old friend
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^_^ thank you... it means a lot...
It's taken me a while to get into this story but in finally hooked enough to read it.
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Thank you, it's kind of my Mona Lisa my baby.
Dam now I want this new story for some curse you
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Originally I played with the idea of Militis Corde to be a prequel to his son's story, but this tory was far more entertaining and meant a lot more as the character of Tyrin is actually based off someone special and the story does have a special dedication.
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I agree that this was far more entertaining and interesting to read and I understand with the tyrin because of parents are vets and both were combat vets
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Indeed, you should see some reflected issues and understand the struggle.
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I have and do sometimes but my mother when into occupational therapy so it does come through most the time.
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^_^ It's why I chose to write it like this, it's a struggle that is criminally misunderstood and under represented. A real and true tragedy that people dismiss or ignore far too often.
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Your right and thank for writing but still going to be waiting for the next one