This story is a sequel to My Little Universe: Season 2
Your favorite Gems and Ponies are back! They've hanged about on Earth for quite sometime, and with their winter-long trip over, comes back to the start of spring. They had their fun in Beach City with many adventures, but now it's Equestria's turn! The Gems are now goin places, and its beyond just ponyville. There's all sorts of places all over Equestria, and even beyond, and its time for Steven and friends to check em out!
Pack your bags, everypony, its time for some Equestrian fun!
(Warning; loads of world-building. )
Season 3 is here and I read it, and I got so say I like the first half. I'll wait for second part to come out, I loving it, but I don't know who to trust the Junsui or the old Kirin? oh well I choose the old Kirin. what could possibly go wrong??
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EquestrianKirin is back in action
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And so it begins.
Nice start, can't wait to read more.
The Umakumo kind of reminds me of a Japanese legend centering around a creature called the Jorogumo, who was a large spider that could transform herself into a beautiful woman to lure in her prey. Can't help but wonder if that's where you got the inspiration from.
7201691 Indeed, the journey continues
Jeez, I'm late! But anyway, KIRIN!!! My favorite type of mythical pony! Shoulda told me, I had one in stock. But anyway, I love the world building and all the lore, especially ones inspired by rl mythology.
You don't mean a goatee? Like Discord has?
If I'm not completely wrong, it's supposed to be either 'wo' or 'to' here. I'm not as sure as I should be, but I know it at the very least isn't supposed to be a single 'o' there. Can't remember any words like that, only 'to' or 'wo'. Damn, I studied Japanese about a year ago, and these are some of the basics I should remember...
... You know, I expected Emerald to be in this chapter for several reasons... Or maybe that's just my ego talking since he's my OC and I wish he had more screen time... In any case, I can see a few missed opportunities with him right here. Although, I believe the concern of his gemstone will be addressed shortly, possibly by the other gems leading him to the spring containing Rose's tears.
7217503 happy you like it ^^
7217512 it's also referred as a goatbeard, yeah.
He'll come around
I feel like this is shaping up to be a slice of life story. Out of curiosity, will that change in future chapters?
I feel like this is a reference to something.
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I just don't know what.
7222824 for the whole season? Well you'll see
Nice. Very relaxed.
7222824 I guess we'll never know where that reference is from.
7223080 thank you ^^
I think that should have been Pinkie saying all the dialogue here. That would be a great callback to Rainbow Rocks
7226236 well, that's true
I don't normally read the comics... actually, that's a lie. Except for pages and snippets here and there, I have NEVER read the comics before. But I don't need to to know that this was a better take on it.
7230245 I'm glad you think so, thank you ^^
Nice to see that some of the issues with that comic were fixed. Although secretly I would have loved to see how those bulls would have reacted to a thirty-foot tall, five eyed, four armed purple titan.
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Seriously, who would want to fight that?
Anyway, good show as always.
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Well that was nice and sweet. . . until Scarlet tells some of the other dragons about the living gemstones. I mean, come on, she had to have seen the rock stuck to Lapis's back, right? And I imagine a living gemstone would make a pretty rare prize that just about any self respecting dragon would want in his or her hoard.
Anyways, good chapter.
7242208 thank you ^^
<<~~ My only reaction.
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wow that's nostalgia childhood reference it's warm my heart. good job in this chapter.
7243450 It warms mine too ^^ I'm so glad you like it
Anyway, good chapter.
7248088 see you're having fun with this thank you
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Oh yes. . . much FUN.
7248872 oh god, that laugh XD
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IT fOLlowS mE in My DreAMS.
. . .
Ahem, well anyway, Good story so far.
7248890 thank you
this chapter you wrote for this crossover just made me shed a tears of joy at the end. and a funny since peridot don't know what's the good luck package is, when looking for it with derpy that's too cute.I Love this chapter.
7249300 thank you very much
7248872 Holy Crap that will hunt me in my Dream, well you won that Evil Laugh. For Now
borrowed
And Everybody in human population in beach city got Diabetes Minus the gems, The End. Great chapter.
P.S. I love pinkey pie over-dramatic on Lapis tiny velvet frosting treat expose evidence on her face, funny.
7259818 thank you ^^
7259780 fixed
I can just imagine Pinkie screaming at the top of her lungs, "THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!"
Quick question, is the Cluster still an issue in these stories? Because I would imagine that a giant mass of gem shards buried in the Earths crust, threatening to take form at any given moment would be a pretty big issue.
I can just picture Yellow Diamond sending the following message.
Hello puny organics and traitorous gems. At first I did not see the necessity of this message seeing as how I despise Earth and all it represents, but since we are on somewhat good terms at the moment I felt obligated to inform you of the massive forced fusion buried a few kilometers under your planets surface. Given how long it has been since it was created, it should emerge very soon, no more than a few months time, effectively destroying every shred of life on the planet. Ask Peridot if you need to know anything else.
Anyway, good luck with that. :)
Love: Yellow Diamond
7260515 First off, glad you like it.
As for the cluster, I'll PM you about that ...
7260515 I'm with with Dilos1. the Cluster is Coming. The End Is Coming!!!
It took me a few times to realize there wasn't two Pinkie Pies while reading this. This could have been avoided if written a bit differently. Just making sure you're aware that this part could be misinterpreted like that. Otherwise it was an enjoyable read.
7263318 I'll fix it, thank you
7263319 I would have posted this comment earlier but... I kinda forgot.
7263320 eh, it happens
Aww, that was cute.
Again, good chapter, although I feel that there was a missed opportunity while Steven was showing Peri how to dance.
Namely:
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7275191 that fusion looks adorable :3 glad you liked this chapter
Peridot Dancing Like a Boss , I love it. espically when Emerald call her "little Pizza Slice"it's cute and Funny. but I have three questions what, when and how that Emerald get a job? that I wonder.
7276827 glad you like it ^^