A sergeant in the Equestrian National Air Force is discharged from service and must restart his life. A past that he was commanded to bury comes back swinging, and he must choose to embrace it and face being a traitor, or leave behind his old life completely.
woooooooo keep it up!!!!!!!
I can see Rainbow Dash getting into Celestia's face over this...
Make Dashie cry (happy tears of having her brother back) and I will consider you a legend
So, does anyone want a chapter about the date? Or is it going to be worked into the start of the next chapter?
Since I didn't get any feedback, I just wrote the date chapter.
Is the truth ever gonna be told?
860801 I sure hope so, if not this story is going to end really poorly.
Oh dear... here it comes....
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This is so OoC Celestia for doing this to Dashie and AJ (removing a brother just cause of a secret)
922886 oh really? Who says that she isn't hiding many dark secrets, that when they are revealed, end up destroying life as all know it?
I never really thought of myself as a conspiracy theorist, but oh well.
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Damn you!!! Give me moar!
His punishment is a Pinkie Party?
lol to a soldier a party is A punishment lololol
Well, that was... unexpected.
I think more chapters, but having Gildas bro return and ensue epic mono y mono fight
That was probably one of the most horrifyingly painful writing experiences of my life. There was just no inspiration.
Just drink some VODKA!
No vodka whiskey :D
It's a little baby chapter.
Not a well-developed ending, but there is an epilogue and a sequel on the way.
Well, there it is. The rest is up to you guys.