Seven Days in Sunny June, Book I sidestory: In the wake of the Vibe incident, two people, from different walks of life, must deal with their own failures and regret.
Love and tolerate, we've all heard it before. But what do you do when somepony is different from you, in a way you don't like? Goldengrape finds out the hard way that all isn't a dance on roses if you wanna follow your heart.
In a world torn by conspiracy, hate and a grand conflict with an old, mysterious enemy that once was thought to have fallen, Rarity and Pinkie, in their own separate paths, will come to find that the world they live in was not as it all seemed.
When one of Freeport Magus Sunset Shimmer's friends is nearly killed, she must find out who is responsible and decide how far she'll go to bring the attacker to justice.
A psychological thriller meant to explore the more abnormal aspects of foalhood psychology. What if there were deeper reasons why you couldn't achieve your cutie mark? Why you felt so alone in the world?
Here's some advice, don't make your story description one part description to three parts explanation, everything after that initial couple of lines, either chop it down or save it for the author's notes/blog posts. As of right now this story doesn't really have a description, even in those first few sentences, they don't tell anyone anything about what's going on or what this is about. There's having an air of mystery and then there's just been plain vague and annoying, might as well just write 'this is a story about characters doing things in places'.
6949058 Hey, thanks for the advice. I really did mean to avoid that when I wrote the description, that sense of unnecessary plot vagueness, but beyond giving an emotional description of the story's tone (which, to be honest, is really the primary thing I look for when I preview others' stories), I didn't know how else to be explicit without spoiling the angle I was going for. Did you read any of the actual story? If so I'd be interested in hearing your perspective on several others aspects that I imagine, well... you would likely have strong opinions on.
Why do I think of the X-men when I read this
Good story btw
Here's some advice, don't make your story description one part description to three parts explanation, everything after that initial couple of lines, either chop it down or save it for the author's notes/blog posts. As of right now this story doesn't really have a description, even in those first few sentences, they don't tell anyone anything about what's going on or what this is about. There's having an air of mystery and then there's just been plain vague and annoying, might as well just write 'this is a story about characters doing things in places'.
6949058 Hey, thanks for the advice. I really did mean to avoid that when I wrote the description, that sense of unnecessary plot vagueness, but beyond giving an emotional description of the story's tone (which, to be honest, is really the primary thing I look for when I preview others' stories), I didn't know how else to be explicit without spoiling the angle I was going for. Did you read any of the actual story? If so I'd be interested in hearing your perspective on several others aspects that I imagine, well... you would likely have strong opinions on.
6953506 It's in my read later, I can't make any promises when if ever I'll get around to it
This is well written but a little hard to follow. Sad that it doesn’t have more views.