After the events of "Crusaders Of The Lost Mark" Diamond Tiara becomes friendlier and finally accepts the CMC as her friends. All is well for her...except for the fact that her mother is beating her on the down low and her dad doesn't even care.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders never got along with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. Scootaloo hates them more then the other two however, and wants nothing more then for them to dissapper off the face of Equestria.
Diamond Tiara has always enjoyed picking on the Cutie Mark Crusaders. But one day, she finds she's gone too far, and everything for her comes tumbling down. But help may come from the most unexpected of places...
When Rainbow Dash takes in a baby Pegasus left on her doorstep, she learns what it means to be a mother to a child with special needs when it's revealed that she is completely blind.
I'm going to make a critique, I hope that's all right. Well, first off, I really enjoyed the story. The character's emotions were believable and there weren't 'Mary Sue' moments. I feel the last chapter of the story was a bit rushed and that there was more to the story. There was one spelling error I noticed, "Far from th Quarray eels, Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash landed on the highest peak of the canyon." Besides that, great story! I really enjoyed reading it.
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1578323 Your thought beyond a menial word please?
1579553 thats it its done no long chapter
1580153 Excuse me?
I'm going to make a critique, I hope that's all right.
Well, first off, I really enjoyed the story. The character's emotions were believable and there weren't 'Mary Sue' moments.
I feel the last chapter of the story was a bit rushed and that there was more to the story. There was one spelling error I noticed, "Far from th Quarray eels, Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash landed on the highest peak of the canyon." Besides that, great story! I really enjoyed reading it.
2448114 Thank you! I'm always up for critique unless stated otherwise.
ya laost me at metal wings
2642226 It could happen! If horses can fly and speak and do magic, they can have prosthetic wings.
Season Five finale confirms it! Yay you!