Fluttershy finds a tired humanoid in her back yard and takes the wounded creature to her home to help.
She has no idea why it has a gun, black mask like eyes, or such a fresh vibe, but she'd never leave a poor creature to suffer.
But she couldn't predict the attacking creatures that follow.
You're a kid, you're a squid.
It's a good idea, but Flutterhy is acting a bit OOC according to me. I was expecting her to use the glare on the octoling when he called Emily a twerp and told her to come out. Cannon Fluttershy would have been mad that he was trying to hurt someone after pretending to be their friend.
6679293 That's leaving aside many grammatical errors and typos.
6679408 Yes, but those I can always get around, after all, easiest way to get past that is to keep writing and have people help you develop, so I won't be taking points away for something like that... Unless it's completely unreadable.
I really like this story!
I really got to get Spaltoon!
She didn't even introduce Applejack.
But still good!