This idea wouldn't leave my mind. It's gonna be a short story about the Rainbooms going to this year's Grand Galloping Gala. Yeah, the one with the Smooze. A little random, a little human, a little rock'n'roll. Nothing special.
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It's better to see death from her funny side. On my funeral there's gonna be a clown. I would hire Pinkie Pie, but sadly she only exists inside our poor minds.
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Love the first chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Sunset, you fool , Trolestia is planning revenge on you vía Discord.
Interesting. Cant wait to see how the girls are gonna react to meeting their pony selves
First dress. No contest
First dress since this song would be fitting for it:
This is NOT how you write a story description. This isn't a story description, it's an author's note. You need to look at other stories on the site to get an idea of how story descriptions work.
Also, it's Smooze, not Snooze.
6223331 BECAUSE this is not how you write a description, I did it this way. I wanna stick out a little bit.
DDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Looking at Fluttershy pinning Twilight agaist the wall with a said hug...."mmmmmm Now Kiss!"
6252207 Rated E. No F/F shippings. N_N
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Ummmmmmm I was making a joke...........
HNNNNNNG! (Dies from cuteness overload.)
Reminds me of a scene from Chelmsford 123.
Mungo: I bring a message from King Badvoc.
Grasientus: Really? What is it?
Mungo: Ooh. It's a written pardon.
Grasientus: A written pardon?!? What does it say?
Mungo: It says... 'Pardon'.
Was Sunset excited about the invitation or upset? I couldn't tell
Good work though :)
6543870 thanks. I try to update soon enough. Couldn't write so much, because apparently getting a job is important. Actually this time it just so might work.
Done in a day, huh? I could kind of tell (no offence). Might want to edit it.
I like the story, but you need a second set of eyes looking it over. That said, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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A story description serves two purposes:
1. To sell the story's concept to potential readers (to summarize)
2. To sell the author's competence to potential readers
The problem with your approach is that it doesn't stand out... it just looks like yet another case of "good concept, incompetent author", which makes potential readers more likely to spin their scroll wheel an extra few clicks to move on to the next result.
I would have had heels to go with that black dress...
The Fluttershy picture won't show up for me.
MORE please
More please
6543870
She was both.
And it's no suprise. On the one hand, she'd love to go. I mean, come on - the biggest social gathering in all of Equestria, she's dying to go.
On the other hand, she's not all that eager to see Celestia again. I'm not sure if she still resents her a little (probably), but I'm pretty sure she feels terrible for what she did. I wouldn't relish that opportunity either, so it's no suprise that she's somewhat apprehensive.
So yeah, she'd love to go... but sort of doesn't? If that makes sense.
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Bronyshy confirmed. Literally pegasister.
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