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Vertigo-01


"The body exists only to verify one's own existence."

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Life on a farm is tough work – any honest farmer worth their salt will tell you as much. But life on a farm as a filly isn't so bad, especially if you're lucky enough to grow up at Sweet Apple Acres.

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Simple Apple sibling scenes written for fun before joining the site.
Takes place a couple years before the first season.
Cover art credit: GloomyMark Goombot Cosmalumi

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

After reading three of your shorts, I think I've got your style down.
You're a master of the snapshots. You don't create obstacles to overcome, or conflicts to resolve. You don't develop your characters. You give us a snapshot, an idea of what those characters are like in a single moment ( or day) of their lives. You explore characters not by putting them in difficult situations, but by looking at them when they're safe.
It's a type of story that I don't think would work on any format except for fanfiction, as it requires that we already care about the characters involved. Thankfully, this is fanfiction, and you are the master of this sptype of story.

Now, time to read your novel.

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That's cool to hear, haven't heard that input from anyone yet! Admittedly I don't work often with OCs or original situations, although I do in my multichapter work and others I'm working on...

But oh gosh, no, don't read that one!! :raritycry:

I'm just kidding, haha. But I am very self-conscious of my multichapter work. I began writing it before I started whittling down basic structure / grammar stuff, and thus it's going through the most rudimentary of post-publishing edits. It's nearing the end at least. In any case, I wish you the best of luck, and thanks for taking a look at my works. :twilightsmile:

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