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Kyle_67


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Rainbow Dash is not shy to admit that she loves reading. Her newest fascination comes with a series of books about cats who uphold an honorable code and survive in the wild. Never did she consider for even a moment that she would ever visit this world, but she couldn't prepare with what hit her next.

Meanwhile, Petalpaw, a medicine cat apprentice living a peaceful life in ShadowClan, receives her first prophecy from her old leader. Could the strangely colored cats she finds in the forest the next day have anything to do with it?

Now, the newly-turned cats have to survive, uphold the warrior code, and convince other cats that they're trustworthy while achieving what they came there to do: to save the four Clans and the warrior code. If only they had any idea what was wrong...

This does not have the cats that the real world book focus on, although there are some spiritual counterparts of some of my favorites. Also, if you don't know anything about the Warriors universe, this should hopefully introduce new readers to the amazing series by Erin Hunter.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 56 )

This is so good! Thank you for combining two of my favorite things ever!! :pinkiehappy:

not bad, this may be the best MLP and Warrior cats crossover yet.

again not bad.:twilightsmile:

Usually crossover like this are really confusing. I like how you added the prophecy in the first chapter and explained why Twilight,Pinkie, and Rainbow would have to be there. BTW keep up the great work lovin this chapter too

"Please son't scream, Pinkie," Twilight said.

Twilight noticed at once she was trying to scrap four very weird looking hats off of her head.

she wold have to become a cat,

Spelling errors

"Pinkie, there's four hats on your head,"

Should be there are four hats on your head.

Otherwise I love the story, but I think you should've explained the time freeze spell better. I came up with the conclusion it works like this: The ponies on the receiving end of the spell experience something that seems very long to them, but for ponies not on the receiving end it seems more like a fraction of a second. Still pretty confusing. But I can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you very much! Your name has been added in the Author's Note as a helper. Also, the changes have been made. :pinkiehappy:

No Pinkie? Sad face.

I'm liking because I loved the Warriors Series. I've read almost every book while I was in the 6th grade but stopped. I don't know why I did, maybe because I couldn't find the other books anywhere in the library, maybe because I just never felt like going back and reading them. I don't really know.

"I bet she'd be a better teacher then you were," she went on. "Remember when you got scared by that leaf and the finch flew away?" He purred. He didn't respond, and instead went back to sorting herbs.

Isn't PetalPaw speaking and isn't PetalPaw female? If so, why'd you say 'he'?

Rainbow had more questions. "Right, but can't we just go through the back through the portal when we're done, like you did in High School land?" Twilight looked stumped for a heartbeat, but then responded very confidently.

I don't follow.

Twilight's words made Rainbow Dash aware that her legs were shaking. No, she thought. I Have to be strong. For them. She and Pinkie spoke the same words simultaneously.

Have doesn't need to be capatalized. It's not t roper noun or the beginning of a sentence.

I know how hard it is to write Pinkie Pie. I've tried and failed. The only reason why others can see it is because I was tired when I was writing and never bothered fixing it.

Huh. Wish my older Warriors OC was here!:rainbowlaugh: I love it!!

Lol. Oh Petal Claw, where they came from you would know why.

In fact, Rainbow Dash didn't recall a 'Petalpaw' being mentioned at all in the books.

I think there was a Petalpaw, but I can't be sure as I haven't read any of the books in 2 years now.

Congrats Your story made me stop playing fallout 4 for the 30 minutes it took me to read... Moar please

Twilight pretty much used one of her nine lives.

um nope lalalala Twi can not have died already

Will you accept my Warrior oc? I have her name and design too. Also, the back story. I'll pm it to you if so.

6640856 Sure! Like I said, any and all cats are welcome.

Is this after the events of The Last Battle?

Ciderpaw?
I c wat you did there!:ajsmug:

Say wut?! Twi with nine lives? Twistar anyone?

Damn you Cliffhanger!:flutterrage:, but other than that, really good story so far!

"Angel?" Her speech came in sobs. "Angel! Please wake up! Please, it's Fluttershy; please wake up!"

Wait, did they kill Angel through dimensions?

6657733 I was thinking that too. I think their dimension is connected in some way. They kill something there that thing they killed is killed in their world.

FINALLY!!! A Warriors fic that's actually well written and well paced.:yay:

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I think it's either because Flingtail was the one who purred, or it was just a mistype.

I like how you made my Warrior oc an apprentice. Nice touch. Can't wait to see her in future chapters.

Hope to read more soon. GREAT chapter!

Unless...

Fluttershy looked at the portal.

Oh, Celestia, why me?

Elaborate some, please!

Okay, so my theory of this being after the Dark Forest events was incorrect. Shadow Clan on the border of Wind Clan is Pre-Firestar, since there was never any mention of a Shadow Clan medicine cat named Petalpaw.

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Remember that first hat Pinkie was wearing, that cat wasn't in the books either, yet Rainbow Dash recognized which cat it was. So I think the Warriors series the ponies read was different from the ones we read.

6659569 This was meant to be a cliffhanger of sorts. The idea is that Fluttershy is out of ideas when she notices the portal. Since Twilight and company went to the Warriors world through the portal, this ending was meant to symbolize Fluttershy realizing that the only option of what to do next is to go through the portal. I'll edit it to say "The active portal" so it's a bit easier to guess.

yes, new chapter!:raritywink: really liking it so far!

Well your welcome!:pinkiehappy:

Oh and I hope Rainbowdash will be okay.

Flawless inclusion of the Season 5 finale.

nuuuuu the spoilers

6686164 Muhaha! You can't hide from the spoilers!:pinkiecrazy:

"Why are we stopped?

Why are we stopping? or Why did we stop?

"What gives? Why are we stopped again?"

"What gives? Why are we stopping again?"

6686569 I believe this is actually correct grammar, but after searching online I couldn't find a way to back up my argument. I'll change it though; thank you!

6687024 I wasn't sure to correct you or not. It just didn't sound right when I was reading it.

You did the name wrong on my OC, it was Scarfang, not Stormwing

6723393 Hoo boy; do I hate myself.

I did have it, but after my computer crashed, I had to retype 50% of this. I remembered to put the credit in, but I guess I just saw the 'S' name and my idiot brain filled in the wrong information. Very sorry! I'll be sure to do something special with your character to make it up, how's that?

6724969 Sure, and I can understand you goofing up after your computer crashing, I'm not mad at you, I was just pointing it out :twilightsmile:

So Pinkie is wanting to consummate a relationship with Nightstripe. Wonder if Two and Dash might find a pon- cat that they like.

Or TwiDash in cat form.

Seems pretty reasonable that Pinkie would adapt to this life the quickest. If anything, this will make it harder for her to leave. Something tells me Nightstripe is going to die later on at the end in order to allow Pinkie the ability to return to Equestria with her friends. Dark line of thinking, I know, but it's the only thing I can think of besides Nightstripe returning to Equestria with them as a stallion.

I call dibs on my OC and Twilight! Or Rainbow...:rainbowlaugh:

Dang, things are getting interesting!

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