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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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This story is a sequel to Lyra Heartstring at the Library: A Musial Interlude


As I got to Ponyville, I visit Princess Twilight Sparkle in her new castle. It isn’t as if I had never seen her, her library or her castle before. The first time I saw her was when she liberated me from the curse of my own negative emotions.

This time around, I am back to the happy self I was supposed to be. I have a purpose and a position I can be proud of. Besides, the shadow of my older sister Celestia isn’t overshadowing the way it did before.

Before I left her library at the castle, she presented me with a book. She told me to read it. That it was about a character I may be able to relate to. I accepted the book and thanked her for the gift before I left her with a smile on my face.

Once I got home, I started to read the book. Apparently it is about a girl, like the once at Canterlot High. A girl who was different and felt alone, just like I had done. The girl is special in other ways too.

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The dialogue seem'd to verge 'twixt cumbersome and soft-tongue. Perhaps finding a patron to bewray thy mistakes would be suiting of thee. I shall favorite it, 'tis good so far.

5939454 I could appreciate it, if someone was kind enough to help me finetune the details in order to make the story better. Conversation is no exception in that regard. Hope the conversation carry the story towards where I intended it to go.

This was a secation of interaction between the two Princesses. Twilight sharing her love for reading with a fellow Princess. Apparently she got more books into her Library than she had dared to hope.

Now I will have to work out a few details of what will come next and how to frame the story, as it were.

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