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SlipperyWhenPlastic


My own Arch Nemesis. All Cadance, All The Time.

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can't wait to read more

Needs more chapter! I know it's there, I was prereading for ya... :rainbowhuh:

It's the first chapter and I all ready love it, keep up the good work!

Well that couldn't have been more awkward. :rainbowlaugh:

... Welp, followed.

*gasp*

Velvet's Princess

Please, do go on.

Cadance rolled over onto her back, spreading her legs briefly at Shining.

Princess of Lust.

and she watched him walking away until he had turned a corner at the far end of the street.

She worships the booty.

She found herself staring at Velvet's vinyl-clad butt and quickly averted her gaze.

Button's Mom has nothing on Twilight's Mom.

"What? Oh..." Cadance shrugged again. "Please. I don't take it black."

If she doesn't like zebras then wouldn't it be black and white?

"I'd have to untie him and take off the magic suppressor if he wanted to use anything else. He's quite nimble with his mouth."

Cadance is going to ask her for Brain Bleach soon enough.

Can't a mature mare have a sex life?"

Celestia is getting plenty of sex.

"You might want to let the fresh air under your tail before you get anywhere too crowded. Somepony might get the wrong idea."

Cadance? A virgin? Ha!

5901557 yep she done did doo'd dat
5900470 and then it was
5901468 :pinkiegasp:

5901639 :pinkiegasp: is exactly it. That was... Quite something. All that should be right in a fic of this vein, without all the terribad rapeyness folks seem to need to put in. The babysitter/parent thing had me worried for a second, but this has more a vibe of two adults interacting, rather than... that.
Cheerfully followed, looking forward to the next chapter.

One thing though, you should really find some good cover art for this and drop the stock Cadence image. There's a ton of good artists in the fandom and some will even let you use their art just for the asking. Or you could commission someone.

Fun story so far, well done!

At some point it said that 'Twilight' stood in the doorway. Even though I shouldn't, I still got confused and thought it was Twilight Sparkle for a second, as Twilight Velvet's name is usually used in full.

"I—I guess relationships are part of my magic," Cadance replied. She waited for Twilight Velvet to open the front door. The mare at least had the decency to step back into the shadow as she did so. "I'm sorry about how I acted."

I don't think being awkward when someone's talking about something like sex is something you should apologize for but whatever.

I'm not generally into this stuff (at least by itself), but this was pretty hot anyway.

She could still hear the imagined squeak of rubber stretched tight across surprisingly firm flesh...

Flash she's seen plenty of times before in the nude.

The shower had seen more use than the entire week prior.

Either Cadance doesn't bathe that much, or she was just playing with herself and not admitting it.

She thought about the arctic. At night.

During the summer of course. Just above freezing, the ice is soo slick...

They just cuddled and occasionally argued, and somewhere along the line a foal came into the picture and grew up into a princess.

No joke, what does that last part mean? Seriously? Did Cadance know?

5903974 She knows. She just doesn't want to think about her parents having sex.

I mean, would you?

Yes! The two sexiest ponies and double cheating! This is the quintessence of hot.
Excellent language and flow. Very few errors.

5904321 I meant does Cadance know Twilight will become a Princess?

5912475 She was thinking about herself rather than Twilight.

Great chapter, liking the interaction between the two.

Even better than I expected.

wandering aimlessly around the palace and getting into mischief,

It's what she always does.

locked in her rooms, masturbating until her sheets were soaked and her body ached from sheer exhaustion.

I wonder if Celestia knows how often she does, I wonder how often Celestia does the same.

She just noped nopony had looked up while she was flying over them.

Subtract the N, add an H. And how close do you have to be to see a soggy vagina, and in a world of nudity, is it really that big of a deal?

looking about the garden for any clue that might have revealed Twilight Velvet's secret side, but there was nothing.
It was all normal. Completely normal. Just a quiet little suburban garden.

That's the scary thing: normal is always a cover for something. Sometimes it's grief, guilt, fear, sometimes it's something that hurts others.

The idea that a young mare like you would get herself off at the thought of someone my age is incredibly flattering.

It's Twilight Velvet, after she becomes an adult, who cares how old she is?

culminating at her loins and her already soaking tail.

Just how much abuse does a ponies tail go through?

What are you here to do, Cadance?"

Submission.

"Come inside," she said.

Rainbow Dash.

"Pastiche."

That's Celestia's safety word too. She says Banana too often.

No orgasms. No sex. No physical pleasure of any sort. When the three days are done,

That's harsh. And a pretty intense way t make her lust after her Mistress.

Damn, this is excellent.

5949627

That's harsh. And a pretty intense way t make her lust after her Mistress.

That would be her doing it right.

Absolutely going to follow this! Very hot!

SHL

This is good. Really good. I'll keep an eye on it.

I have no kittens to torment you with, but if I did have some they'd be very sad. Why are you making my hypothetical kittens sad?

5912475 I was actually wondering that too XD

so is this still being worked on or is it pretty much dead

Bwahahah! Brilliant! Poor Cadance, it's generally hard to imagine the face that looks at you in a motherly way can also be a face clad in vinyl.

For some, it's not just the fear of being caught. For some, it's the knowledge that they're doing something stupid, the anxiety and stress of being stalked, and finally the fear of being cornered. Then it's the excitement of fighting to get away, delaying the inevitable, feeling the excitement of being hunted down again, then being trapped into a corner again. For some, that is incredibly erotic.

This is really good. I hope this story will continue. From the looks of things, it seems as though you've left it hanging for a while now.

Kind of sad this paused; it was off to a really good start. I hear Slippery is writing again, though. Excited that it might continue.

Nice chapter, though there's a bit where you forgot a quotation mark.

"That's so sweet of you!

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Or are you...?

*sigh* I don't think he's ever coming back.

Dammit, I had hoped the last episode with Velvet would bring him back.

"Pity," said Twilight Velvet. Cadance could almost hear the smirk.

Oh boy... That one is good!

No, Cadance was stuck by herself, with only her tea... and the repeating image of a perky pair of buttocks, wrapped in a taut black skin of shimmering vinyl, swinging back and forth in front of her face.

Sound of two balloons rubbing on one another.
SqueeSquuSqeee... :rainbowlaugh:

Why isn't there a comedy tag!?
(other then hitting us by surprise)

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