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ilikepie56


I really like pie. Pie and ponies.

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(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Okay this is going straight to my favorites and my Random Bookshelf.

EDIT: I demand a sequel!

Eevee #2 · Apr 6th, 2015 · · 1 ·

...Well.




Insta-fave + follow

5828978 Well. Thanks!

5828911 A sequel shall come. Eventually.

Pure silliness, have a fav!:yay:

The answer is 42... Love it... :trollestia:

Okay who was the idiot that disliked almost every comment? :facehoof:

Well, that was weird. But not the weirdest I've read. Thumbs up.

I did notice two cases of two speakers in one paragraph:

“The – the chicken! It gave me an evil smile like it was plotting something!” Sweetie Belle gave the same look she did when Scootaloo mentioned threatening the chicken, a look of disbelief. “You okay, Scootaloo? You seem to be going a bit crazy.”

Whenever you change speakers, you're supposed to start a new paragraph.

... Chicken fight.

5829654 Oh really? I've noticed in some stories that there are multiple speakers in one paragraph. Are there exceptions or are they just learning like me?

Yes, made me laugh. Get a upvote a fav an this comfy moustache :moustache:

5829722
Just learning. It's a grammatical rule. No exceptions.

The chicken wins, but I'm not saying which one (get it?)

Chicken Fight! Hilerious. Especially scince Scootaloo is called a chicken. XD :rainbowkiss:

After many months, I have finally read this. And I like it.

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