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I'll be keeping my eye on this one.
Much exclamation points!!!!!!!
Very grammar grammar
Such transition words
Moocho el foalcon
WOW
I suggest double spacing the lines, not doing so makes the story seem long and uneventful from the first glance.
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(Sigh.) Come on, better read this to see what the fuss is. I won't judge you on the fetishes, just their execution.
God help me.
I can't do it. I got to when she was getting the vibrator inserted, and I refused to go further. Everything here contradicts my moral code. I would seriously reconsider your time.
Winking clits... foal fisting... ME GUSTA!
This doesn't seem very liked...
I have a group for that
5822188 oh preanut you so silly
This is extremely sexy
5838059 Couldn't resist
Update for all that have read it. (character pictures. http://sta.sh/2zpuyj2ymrf)
5826631 That's the one thing that just really bugs me. It wouldn't be a problem if the characters were at the legal age of consent, and knew what they were getting into. But we're talking about school aged children being involved in this sort of stuff.
This is like one of those stories that tries to be good but I still can't decide whether I like it or not.
this is pretty wacky lol....
5826631 the fic might not have the tag but read it as a comedy dude lol.....
oh for fucks sakes , one of the very few fics that involves hoofing of any kind , and it's in a fic that i can't not take as 100% satirical , even then it's still able to effect me a little in terms of being disturbed.....
It was mildly erotic in some parts but the language is just kind of hilarious. Like I was reading it more as a comedy than anything else haha.
5831729 language
Soo... i don't mind a way to create a way for a dadless filly (unsure bout the age yet) to try to find a outlet to help them do wonders.... However this.... Didn't bold well for me.
1. You failed to mention at her Story's Main Page about something referring to some sorta device that causes pleasure which if i recall the word "Plesure".
2. The Story had a Right idea of input.. But missing key things Like "She didn't have friends" otherwise its sorta a Forced upon against someone so fast...
3. The chapter Was Improperly entered with Cut sentences and Unclear Scripts as in Who was talking during some things.
I can't Continue reading past the first chapter knowing these things.. I'm all for a Good Padded Sad Story about Moving on and finding peace... this wasn't a Step I expected or can't take. I won't down vote since i'm too nice. However i won't read on further. I'm sorry if this was a bad review but it is my opinion and i wish of you to respect my saying in a kind and good manner
I WAS RAPE AT 15
4 years of work? but the first chapter was posted a year ago....
7676507 Basically, that was when the first chapter was ready. I had been wotking on it for three three and a half years up to that point.
7678046 oh wow....
I miss this story
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Thanks.
There are only few problems i have with this, 1 needs more editing, lots of grammatical errors. 2, using rape as a plot device outside of a rape or dark theme fic. I like the idea of fillies discovering their sexuality, but i’d rather keep it to rubbing massaging and vibrating. There is minor insertion but not enough for me to reject it out of hand. That being said a lot of these fillies while they are, well fillies, they seem to have more adult knowledge. Which can be fine if they were older, but i feel like making out is a bit much. (yes i'm aware of the irony of this statement.) That being said i love the spanking scenes. Maintenance spankings are a prime favorite of mine, and while not formatted in the best way, the spanking scenes are the best part. Over all id say its an even 5/10, it needs polish, and i feel like if you loose some of the hoof insertions, id have less qualms about it.