Nopony likes to be lonely at the school prom and yet, one sits alone as he watches others have their fun. Maybe tonight will be different.
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That's right, there is only one Dance.
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Good story outlaw.
Perfect!
A visual symphony with not a single missed note.
You have excellent skills with writing emotions realistically, as well as accurately depicting the main character's awkwardness and uncertainty. Also the way you portrayed the enormity and importance of how a teenager views things during that time of his life, was spot on.
Short version- You write well.
The memories of the prom, high school nostalgia from the movies I've seen. Great job, outlaw.
...damn, man. I know that feeling.
Still, plenty of ships in the fleet. No need to give up hope.
5596726 Thanks! I felt the story needed more to really drive the point home but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
5596911 At least there was no swirly. That would've really been a downer ending.
5596968 Maybe, the story still drove the point home.
5596932 A lot of us have been there, including myself. Inspiration for so many songs, though.
This song was playing in my head at the ending.
5597191 Interesting! Somewhat before my time but I sorta had this song at the back of my head as I wrote this.
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The ending made me think not only of the song, but also the ending of the movie it was made famous in, The Last American Virgin...
Keep in mind, the song plays over that ending. It's just as heartbreaking.
Damn. That ending really did surprise me.
Very well written, as always, and very enjoyable.
5604629 That type of ending is the reason I wrote this story. It's good practice in case I end other stories in a similar way.
Very well done. The emotions you wrote for Dusty I remember so very well! You did a great job with this one.
7420326 Thanks. Pretty much my intent there on invoking those emotions.