This story is a sequel to Light My Fire
NOTE: This story serves more as a prequel to Light My Fire, however, you don't need to read Light My Fire to enjoy this story.
Today is Hearts and Hooves Day, a day where every pony in Equestria gives their special someponies their love and care. Usually everyone enjoys this day expecially Sweetie Belle, but for Spike, love is just a game for him since he knows that Rarity will never want a guy like him, however, that will soon change. When he receives a love letter from Sweetie Belle, Spike begins to reconsider his feelings for her older sister and asks Twilight for help while Sweetie Belle asks for Rarity's advice on what to do when Spike tells Sweetie if he has feelings for her or not.
No CMC tag since Scootaloo and Apple Bloom aren't major characters in the story.
This is really cute so far, but I did find a few errors:
That should be "on them"
If Sweetie Belle is Spike's admirer, then should it be secret crush?
Anyway, I really enjoyed this, looking forward to the next chapter!
cute
So... it's a sequel and prequel?
Just found a couple grammatical nuisances:
Should be they're
Should be students'
Also,
Doesn't saying your name defeat the purpose of the whole "secret admirer" shebang?
Anyway, nice job! I love it!
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Fixed them!
Thanks for the help!
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5132111 You're welcome
"Spikes too young for you sis !"
"He's too old for you Sweetie Belle!"
"He's my dragon !"
"He's my Spikey Poo!"
"He rubbed my flank"
"He fed me bad cupcakes"
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NO! HOW DARE YOU GET HOOKED ON THIS STORY ONLY TO SAY ON HIATUS!!! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE YOY HAVE TO CONTINUE!! PLEASE!!!
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Woah, calm down there! I will continue it at my own time, I take my time writing my stories and currently, I'm taking a break from this so I can release some of my upcoming one-shot stories.
One year? Good grief, this hiatus is too damn long.
Also, "Sweetie got her back and put it on her back". You mean backpack.