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darkstone57


It took me 10 years to find answers to something… I forgot about it in 2 seconds. That’s about it

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Through an untold circumstance, Luna bore witness to a human's mind being tormented by a entity of malice as the human tried to live his life, through a nightmare. After waking from this nightmare, she could still feel the malice that the human felt in her hooves.

This was no coincidence, nor was it her imagination.

She had to do something.

Rated 'Teen' due to scenes of violence and mild coarse language

[Soul Calibur III Crossover]

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Comments ( 2 )

... you're gonna need an editor, buddy. I see lots of misplaced punctuation marks, improper use of "as", and lexicon mistakes like mixing up "to" with "too", among others.

I'll read this once that is done.

Fair enough. Thanks for pointing it out.

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