This is the story of Rainbow Dash's rise to fame in the world of extreme racing. Where the story goes, nobody knows, so take a seat, guess, and watch the track unfold in front of you.
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(Tags will be added as the story progresses.)
Don’t think I have seen such a story before, so you get plus points for originality. The mix of characters is promising as well, so I’m curious where this leads. But just to nitpick a little, be aware that you tend to get very descriptive at times, doing so via sentences that could be shorter, or in places where it’s not exactly fitting (like the ship’s description in the middle of their banter). Anyway, I’ll keep tracking.