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Holy buck, i must like writing this one. I think i broke my own record with this chapter. Comment and enjoy.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Really liking the direction this is taking. No woe-is-me excessive drama, just Twilight adjusting to what's been forced on her and planning out how to fit it into her life without too much interruption - but at the same time, she's still reacting understandably to 'you need to suck ze blood now, blah'. Feels slice-of-life-y, which is nice.
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Because of that commment I am tempted to make photo phinish a vampony now...![:coolphoto:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/coolphoto.png)
![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
This is interesting, moar!
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'I take ze photos, because I cannot be in zem!'
' ... That's not actually true, Ms Finish. Luna assured me myths like that are just -'
'BLAH!'
'And that's just unnecessary.'
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Now I am definately putting her in.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I LOVES IT. Read it once, then got stoned and read it again. IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
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She could be the other kind of vampony. For comparison sake.
I spy a few capitalization errors (at least three), and may look for them later to send in a PM.
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A compulsion for counting objects being optional?
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![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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Please do, I try to get everything but as of right now i do not have a proofreader.
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Can you at least make her talk without the accent. I think it might be kind of annoying to read this if she talks like that.
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gah, you guys are commenting faster than i can reply.![:derpyderp2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpyderp2.png)
I may or may not, all depends on whether or not i feel like typing in that accent.
Oh hey. Seeing as Luna has explained how to make obedient little vampire friends to Twilight, you have the option of transitioning into a harem fic should vampin' it up get boring on its own.
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... well that would definately fit the description of "Pushing my boundaries." We'll go with we'll see, i haven't thought that far ahead.
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Sleeplessness caused by Monster. I'm just happy That I can't crash!
I would help you out by proofreading, but I'm going back to school tomorrow and that means I won't be allowed to sleep. Well, that and there's no wifi in the dorms and we are not allowed to take our computers into our rooms. Weed helps with the constant boredom, as well as working out constantly.
Hell, you don't even need the transformation, given that just the bite process is erotic. Those of Twi's friends that are in the know subtly competing to see who gets to be her next bite-buddy would be funny.
... Wow, I really do miss that decent haremfic I found that stopped getting updated. I'm putting far too much thought into this.
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I know the feeling brony, although right now it's more oppressive parents, but here isn't the place to bitch about my life. fortunately getting away from it all is only a spliff away.
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I think that last line just made my day. I haven't wrote anything like that and i'm trying to keep things to a first person perspective, but we'll see.
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HELL YEAH!!! BROHOOF!
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Celestia would not approve.
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Well clearly you need to love-bite Celestia first. Get her on-side, so to speak.
But then Luna would not approve. Choices, choices.
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That assumes it works on Alicorns, in particular the Sun Pony.
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And now I'm seeing Celestia standing by the desk in her officer, having been startled into standing by Twilight sneaking in and glomping her neck. Twilight's dangling from her neck, just kinda swaying in the breeze and wondering why it's not working, and giving Celestia the best 'nothing weird here no ma'am' look she can and KNOWING it's not working, and Celestia's just LOOKING at her...
"Did Luna put you up to this? She put you up to this. She does it to all her little 'blessed'. Go bite 'Tia, she says. She's *tasty*, she says..."
Extra points for marching through the halls of the palace, dangling vampony in tow, to get in a screaming match with her sister!
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Correction:
THAT comment just made my day.
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But what is the point of
if she does not speak with the accent?
love it!
im really looking forward to hearing about those dark magics that twi should be able to use now ![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
this chapter was a lot better than the last one in pretty much everything, you had good structure to your sentences and made most things very clear, you had a lot more details and thoughts as well. i still think AJ and spike are a little to accepting of what happened; i was expecting some more questions from them as well as a more nervous behavior during the initial moments after finding out. another thing; i dont think you were clear enough of why twilight was afraid she would hurt AJ back in the orchard; i mean i only thought about it when twilight told AJ why she ran, i got the impression that she just panicked and ran cause she wasn't ready to face her yet.
anyways, keep up the good work, really like the story!
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She did have a brief thought about what her blood would taste like...
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; its probably just me though, im a little out of my head at the moment since i bought and played ninja gaiden III (on hard difficulty) today; its quite draining to be honest ![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
yea, and that's the only reason i actually remembered something about it and didn't go complete-confusion-mode when twi and AJ talked about it , i simply said i didnt think he was clear enough
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I'll probably be revising that, I sometimes think of better ways to word things after hearing comments.
Very Good story so far I am definitely tracking this one and giving my thumbs up though I do have a few hopes and questions...
first thing I am curious about is if you named Ceres after the Cop turned vampire from the manga/Anime Hellsing in part because I liked Hellsing and secondly because the reference is actually very fitting given Ceres was absolutely repulsed at the thought of drinking blood.
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second thing I am curious about the version of the blessing Celestia created that Ceres mentioned briefly in the first chapter, I hope you expand on that one at least somewhat in later chapters I am curious as to what price they pay for the solar blessing.
and finally I am looking forward to seeing just what forms of dark magic Twilight is going to end up learning.
359545 O.K., thanks. I guess that I haven't made it to that part yet as I'm reading chapter 2 now. This story really is looking interesting.
I agree with 358801, especially in that I think that Spike took the idea of Twilight becoming a vampony much too well for what we know of him. I'm drawing on his reaction to the immagined "Zombie Ponies" in the episode in which Zecora was introduced and the Poison Joke played their terrible tricks. A.J. may have taken it a little bit too well too, butI think that it was mostly Spike.
Maybe the Solar version of the Blessing involves wereponies that can shift form a will, except that the light of the full moon forces them to reveal their new, true forms (without messing with their minds of course.)
As it was last time, great chapter.
I'm starting to think that I'm becoming as obsessed with this story as I am with "Blood is Thicker Than Friendship" and I didn't buy weed for a week just because I was waiting for the new chapter to be published.
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well as to your first question, yes I did name her after that as a sort of tribute to my favorite anime. The last two would be spoilers so i will leave them.
As for all of the comments about spike and AJ taking things too easily, that's what revisions are for. I'm still learning this so keep an eye on my blog for revisions, I'll do them before they affect later chapters. Plus don't think i just do things at random, i have ideas that are going on.
I personally don't think their reactions are too bad. Twilight is laying it out in pure black and white terms. That she didn't choose this also helps with her argument, plus they are all her friends, even if it IS like, right after the NMM events, which is like, insanely quick to develop true friendshipping.
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I thought about that then I realized, if they were the elements of harmony something must have clicked. 'sides, there's things you folks don't know about yet
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One thing, your description of the reason behind the downside for the 'Blessing'. That a pony's magical powers simply isn't sufficient to handle the upside, would that even really apply to Twilight? Being that she has always had so much more power than an average pony?
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Well, okay think of it as you have two jugs of water, each with a hole in it and a small tube pumping water back in.. One jug has twice the water of the other, yet they both still leak out at the same rate. Likewise the rate of water going in is the same for both, about half of what is needed to stop the output from mattering.
Twilight can go for longer without drinking, but she still needs to or else she won't be able to recover enough energy in time. My thoughts on unicorn magic is that they all recover energy at the same rate naturally, just some can store/use more at one time. Think of it like... you have two cars and one has a larger gas tank with the same basic engine. the one with the larger tank can go for longer but it takes longer to fill.
I'll be explaining this all later but it's not all that important or spoilerific so have a bit of headcannon right now.
interesting not the usual im a vampire so im gonna hide it from everyone story, like how she kinda accepts it and applejack doesnt go all vampire hunter on her.
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Yeah, someone else is already running one of those.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
well as usual when i see an undead or vampire story i like i have to steal a line.
Life is change, chaos, filth and suffering.
Death is peace, order, everlasting beauty.”
361239![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
who (or what is the stories name)?...my tracked stories doesnt update fast enough so i have to find more to read!
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I think that refers to Embracing the Darkness, which you are tracking.
If you would like more stories to look into (and have not checked out everything I am tracking / have faved) send me a PM about what kind you like (or dislike) and I can send back some recommendations.
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i will have to take a closer look at your favorites and tracks soon (i took a quick look not to long ago)![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
since i seem to find you in the comments at almost every fic i find really good
as to Embracing the Darkness; i recognized the concept but i thought he meant a fic where applejack literally goes vampony hunter on twi and tries to kill her, meaning that twi has to run
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that gives me an idea, but i'll be locking that one away for a while.
Love this! Tracked and faved!
Great idea with the whole blessing thing, though if I read correctly, there was something about Celestia having a blessing as well?
I must admit I am curious as to what that blessing would entale, and what would happen if Twilight got both, seeing as how she is Celestia's student and all.
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I have a hunch on what Celestia's blessing entails.
Hint: It's the reason some call her 'Molestia'.
Curse these criminally brilliant authors! they drive me to read!
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and I should be writing an essay too... fierfek.