Eager to try new spells that only Alicorns can perform, Twilight Sparkle asks her assistant Spike to assist her. Little do they know that this is an unlikely age spell. How does the gang react? But more importantly, how does Twilight react?
Cover picture ©Hoof Beat 2 (Another Pony Fanbook)
Takes place during the events of The Pinkie in Applejack's eye
Your grammar is terrible, but the story is enjoyable.
If this is Pony Twilight...
it should be Hooves, not Hands. =s
Deathtap, I will fix my grammar in later chapters.
Seinaru, If you recall what an anthro pony is, it means that they can have bodies like humans and have horns and wings. See the cover image.
That's funny, I did the same thing in my story when Pinkie Pie becomes all excited again. I just love coincidences, they're so...laughable!
*Laughing no-stop while face-hooving*
3405295 its antro
how is bloody hell is rarity like 14 that make 0 sense
Dragon Blaze-X the reason Rarity's age is like that is because, in the actual show she tends to have spazz attacks once in a while, and I've only seen girls in their early teens do it well. So yes, Rarity is fourteen, at least in my canon, how old she actually is, that's your business.
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Your canon makes more sense than normal canon.
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My cannon goes boom. So i'm really confused
You want their age? Here's a scientific paper about it.
Scientific Paper Link.
It's interesting, if nothing else.
Soory deathtap can't read since I don't have a scribd account.
well u difinitly approved a bit since i read u last so, great job on that n' secondly, poor spike bein in front of ur dream mare lik that - embarrassin anyways keep up t work n' can't wait for moar
If you don't mind me asking when will you be updating the next chapter
The next chapter is being updated right now as we speak Sparityluver. Don't know how it got uploaded before intended time.
I need moar story I am loving it alot very funny and serious at the sametime yay have some hearts and mustaches
Twilight must be the biggest light-weight in all of Equestria.
Still on the fence about this , but plot is entertaining, and from what I rember there is a difference in quality between first and thrid chapter.
Still, watching and enjoying.
...I think you mean Phil, right?
TWILIGHT IS SOOOOOOOO TIPSY, ITS FUNNY
NEXT CHAPTER,
AWAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did I sense a soft FlutterDash ?
That happened to me once, except I ended u[ the Dj, and well, there is no club there anymore.....
You sensed correctly Riz. There is indeed a bit of Flutterdash thrown in there, and Jay Cruiz, I don't know who that is!
well u're doin good so far i'm definity enjoyin my decision to follow this fic. keep up t great work n' can't wait for moar
Twiloghr is best ponie^^, you should fix that spellingerror
Twiloghr makes me picture Shrek in an instant.
Alright the spellng error is fixed. Maybe now everypony will stop making a big deal about it.
pretty good i like it
yay
3405932 and fur, it's,humanized without fur, you can keep horns in human stories if you want.
Still funny as hell!
Still funny as hell!
Still funny as hell!
All together the story's fucking funny!
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Thanks Maxy-boy347, I've been told my work is "fucking funny as hell."
Can't wait for more........
Nice chapter ending was making me lol pretty hard i'm very curious to see what the note says can't wait till you update again.
Family guy FTW!
spike need to be fix
I don't know how that reference got in there Jay Cruiz!
You're not stupid,
we just need to feel the suspense,
so thank you, and i await the next chapter,
also..............
spike finding out that twilight was clopping to him is sooooooooooooooooooooo not adorkable!!!!!
XP!!!!!!!!!
clop clop clop lol
would like to see how spike is recovering from twi cloping over him
excellent chapter
I'm wondering why she was clopping with him so close....
Just saying, I think she wanted help.....
3478658 Haven't you ever heard of sleep clopping?
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Or she wants the D???
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Aha
3479461 Guess we'll find out next chapter.