This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls 05: A Destiny Denied
At last Twilight Sparkle is going to make the rounds and meet all of Pinkie Pie's best friends, but when she comes face-to-face with Sunset Shimmer, it opens old wounds that may keep Pinkie's dreams of a giant group of close friends from ever being a reality.
It's immature of me, but my favorite bit was Sunset swearing a blue streak.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
And you definitely have my agreement on AJ being an effective leader.
I gotta say, I'm not a fan of Pinkie breaking the fourth wall all the time. It honestly kind of ruins the immersion for me. Still, that's just a personal gripe. Other than that, it was a pretty decent story and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
This one bugged me a bit. I have mixed feelings about fourth wall gags, even with characters as crazy as Pinkie. I prefer the more subtle jokes, but I like subtlety in general. It's still a solid story, and I liked it overall.
I felt bad for Sunset Shimmer in this one. After Sunset Sentry, being nabbed like that has got to be about 94% worse, even if nothing really happened. You just made feel sympathy and worry for Sunset. Huh.... Well done.
As much as I want to see this group fully get together, Pinkie really verges on being a villain protagonist here.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Woow, Pinkie, Chaotic Good much?
Was that a fourth wall break just now!?!?!? 😨
And there we go again with pinkie letting the cat out of the bag.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
How am I not surprised pinkie would do it again, probably because it's her thing.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
You had it coming pinkie as you've tied up sunset. I'd feel the same if that happened to me. 😒
Ok pinkie, I think your taking this a bit too far this time. 😰