Zockmadness and Mini Lbj are two adventurers in the world of Runescape. After a battle, a teleport spell goes haywire, and they end up in Equestria.
Kinda cliche, but I'm putting my own spin on it, so I hope you enjoy it.
Zockmadness and Mini Lbj are two adventurers in the world of Runescape. After a battle, a teleport spell goes haywire, and they end up in Equestria.
Kinda cliche, but I'm putting my own spin on it, so I hope you enjoy it.
Hmmm, I've never seen a RuneScape/MLP crossover before. I used to play the game, but abandoned it in favour of World of Warcraft — which I think is far superior.
Anyway, now that I've read this I can't say that I liked it. Too much 'tell', not enough 'show'.
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I am sorry to hear that you don't like my story, but I am going to revise it and add in more details to the surroundings to make it readable. Thanks for the feedback though.
EDIT: first chapter has been updated.
I rewrote all of the chapters so far. I have included more details, and redid a bit of it.
Also, new chapter. I am going to go faceplant in my room and go to sleep now. PLEASE LEAVE SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR LATER CHAPTERS!
Dude just let the haters hate do your thing man.