After one of their training sessions, Soarin finds out Spitfire has a thing for him. One thing leads to another, and they become closer friends than Soarin would've ever imagined.
2943523 Well, I do have plans to make more. I mean, they've only gone down on each other so far, and I know you Little bastards (jk) aren't gonna be 100% satisfied until he's done her in every way imaginable. So yes, there's probably going to be more, just don't know when. I have absolutely no idea how to write an actual sex scene, so I'm probably gonna have to do a bit more Reading up.
2945247 I liked it. I really did. That's what I meant. But personally, I would've liked a bit more depth of character. For example; we don't really know why Spitfire likes Soarin' so much aside from him being ''sexy''. Is there something else that makes her want to have sex with him? How long has she felt like this? Because based on what we read, her affection towards him is deeper than just sexual desire. That's something readers might wanna know. Character depth is always a good thing.
But for what it is, it's really enjoyable, and I was just throwing suggestions. If you're going to continue this, perhaps dive a bit deeper into their reasons and motivations. That's all. Have a nice day
2945325 Well, I would like to include more character depth once I try (and probably fail) to make Another chapter to this. I just don't Think I'll be very good at it, since I have never written characters that way. I'll certainly try my best to deliver though.
Also, the reason why it doesn't have so much character depth to begin with is because the story was originally going to be very different. I managed to write myself into a corner, and rather than pulling a deus ex machina out of my ass I decided to make it a clopfic instead. Funny how things turn out sometimes, isn't it.
3120545 We know, don't worry about it. If it helps, I have an idea for Another story that contains as much non-consensual depravities as you can shake a stick at. Don't know when it'll be made, but once it is I'll be sure to let you know.
Ha, I knew I recognized that cover image from somewhere.
That was pretty hot.
Few mistakes I saw:
I think there's an extra "s" in there.
There's either too many words here, or too few.
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Thanks for pointing it out. Edited it.
YAY!! Best ship Clop for me to read!!
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Thanks, Always good to hear.
Said it before, I'll say it again: simply wonderful.
Oh my god. I am in love and I haven't even read it yet. So saving this for later tonight.
[edit] Also, holy crap you drew that cover art!? Man, that's awesome! it looks great!
Always love me some SoarinFire. A very underrated shipping IMO.
2942497 Soarfire is best shipping. It's why I wrote one~
2942882 For me, best shipping is Sparity. I do wish that SoarinFire would be given more recognition instead of being passed up like a joke.
Wait wait wait, "Incomplete"? You serious?
I hope so.
No UPS is best shipping fuck that fedex shit
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Well, I do have plans to make more. I mean, they've only gone down on each other so far, and I know you Little bastards (jk) aren't gonna be 100% satisfied until he's done her in every way imaginable. So yes, there's probably going to be more, just don't know when. I have absolutely no idea how to write an actual sex scene, so I'm probably gonna have to do a bit more Reading up.
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Thanks. Nice to hear that someone actually noticed the cover art.
I came here for good SoarFire clop and left with a boner. So underrated pairing, yet so perfect.
And I'll leave this here because why not?
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So, you left satisfied or not satisfied? Still, thanks for commenting.
2945247 I liked it. I really did. That's what I meant. But personally, I would've liked a bit more depth of character. For example; we don't really know why Spitfire likes Soarin' so much aside from him being ''sexy''. Is there something else that makes her want to have sex with him? How long has she felt like this? Because based on what we read, her affection towards him is deeper than just sexual desire. That's something readers might wanna know. Character depth is always a good thing.
But for what it is, it's really enjoyable, and I was just throwing suggestions. If you're going to continue this, perhaps dive a bit deeper into their reasons and motivations. That's all. Have a nice day
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Well, I would like to include more character depth once I try (and probably fail) to make Another chapter to this. I just don't Think I'll be very good at it, since I have never written characters that way. I'll certainly try my best to deliver though.
Also, the reason why it doesn't have so much character depth to begin with is because the story was originally going to be very different. I managed to write myself into a corner, and rather than pulling a deus ex machina out of my ass I decided to make it a clopfic instead. Funny how things turn out sometimes, isn't it.
http://www.listofimages.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/spitfires-british-glen-angus-spitfire-supermarine-spitfire-victory-gal.jpg
HEY SPITS ! I FOUND YOU! :D
Man, why do a lot of first-time clopfic writers choose SpitSoarin' as the first pairing they write? I'm not the only one!
Will read later. Too tired for fappery atm
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It wasn't intentional, it just happened. I know you probably don't Believe me, but that's the honest truth.
More. We must have.
you disgust me. how dare you write a story of two ponies engaging consensual sex?
consensual sex is disgusting and has nothing to do within this fandom.
have some decency and write some rape clop
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Well, you can't win them all, I guess.
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3117320 it was a joke
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We know, don't worry about it.
If it helps, I have an idea for Another story that contains as much non-consensual depravities as you can shake a stick at. Don't know when it'll be made, but once it is I'll be sure to let you know.
i had no idea how well this clopfic did probably because i forget i did it still nice to see that it turned out well
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Well, a lot of people like jacking off to Spitfire and Soarin I guess.
3132349 that might be true but their are other bots they may not be the mane ponies but they need love to
3120545
So was mine
Clop. Clop. Clop. Clop Clop Clop Clop ClopClopClopClop
Ahem... Great story, man! I'm lookin' forward to reading the next chapter.
Also...
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Probably considering they are like rockstars in Equestria, a whole lot.
"off"
Good so far... I know there is something that bugged me but I can't remember... derp.