scene from the fanfiction I've been promoting. This scene takes place during the crusader feud I takled about where I asked you to pick a side. It's also ment to show how the fight affects Apple Bloom. Anyways here's the scene, please give me feedback on how it is, and if there's anything wrong with it then please tell me what it is.
So I'm posting as I'm actually wanting some advice I'm going to try this again. So again. I'm taking several Characters from MLP and picking a song from Attack on Titan and Star Wars for them. I'd really like to know which ones work, and which ones don't. So once again here we go.