Mary Sue Test, Forgetful Memories and Late Shift. · 1:36am Nov 26th, 2020
( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( X) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( X) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
( ) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
( ) Are they royalty?
(X ) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
( ) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)
( ) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
() Your OC's Coat is Black
() Your OC has black and red in their design.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet. ( Snort No)
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one?
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby
Total:
Forgetful Memories ~ 1
Late Shift ~ 2
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( X) Your OC is a smoker.( Mm-hmm, Late Shift is a smoker.)
( X) Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them ( Forgetful can't fly too high because she gets vertigo, loses balance and crash lands everytime she flies, she has to walk everywhere usually late for her jobs.)
() Your OC's cutie mark is something lame ( Forgetful's is a Photo album surrounded by ? Marks, and Late Shift's is an old fashioned clock with a half moon to the side of it, I think they're cute but let me know if they're lame.)
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points) ( I've had Forgetful drawn multiple times.)
Grand Total: Forgetful Memories ~ 0
Late Shift ~ 1.
1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top. ( Not over the top, describes them perfectly they're just normal.)
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.
Forgetful Memories isn't a Mary Sue!
Late Shift simply got a point for being a Bat Pony, lol.
Huh. Neat.
I got an 8 for my score. If it wasn’t for the fact that the cutie Mark meant I/he was human (I qualify it as a lame cutie Mark), it would be 11.
5405164
Sounds interesting as a mark.
I made mine low key, because I mostly write SoL.
So having basically normal characters fit it.
Adventure stories would demand a more grand character.
5405151
Thank you, Sonic.
Lol, jk
5405166
Pretty much.
Yeah, since being human isn’t an ability, that’s what makes it lame :P
5405178
I guess being a night pony isn't an ability eithier.
So my two cm are probably lame too, lol.
5405167
Cloverleaf gets a -2.... while he could be considered a friend of Applejack’s as I state he’s part of her extended family, he’s a unicorn with well below average magical skill (he can’t get telekinesis even, being an issue with his leylines being somewhere between Earth Pony and Unicorn), and his cutie Mark is a bright red telescope.
I could probably count red/black color usage since his mane contains dark red, but that’s just aesthetic, and just red.
5405193
Wow, sounds really cool.
is there an equivalent for changelings?
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Not sure, I guess changelings are more unique by default than a Bat Pony.
Made something myself, surprised how there isn't one for a Kirin.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/927131/pen-hearts-mary-sue-test
Though they're not ponies, they can take the form of a pony if they desire though, the former has a name for his disguise, Shadow Spirit, which he uses to visit Celestia and Luna, and none of the villians or heroes know about them, except for the former when it comes to the bearers.
( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
It's black with red stripes, though some would argue that they're red with black stripes.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
Well they WERE bitten by Flutterbat.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
Maybe. Does being sentient hair count?
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
Glitter makes EVERYTHING better.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
Well it's a side effect of their magic.
() Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
Of course, they're Discord's great grandchild after all.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
Duh, why wouldn't they?
( ) Your OC has changed species.
And gender!
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
See previous answer.
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
They do now.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
They have a phobia of cannons.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
Reverse rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
Well they are half machine.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
Well they are Twilight's child and Fluttershy's grandchild.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
They made it for a school project.
( ) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
Does the brown eye count?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
He's like an ant.
() Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
Several of them.
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
Yes. And yes, it is incestuous.
() Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
See previous answer.
( ) Are they royalty?
Yup.
() Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
Well sentient hair likes to have variety.
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
How did you know?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
Yup.
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
... Does it count if they're the dom and Chrysi is the sub?
( ) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)
How many universes of the six can we count?
( ) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
All at once? Yes.
() Your OC's Coat is Black
Again, it's subjective.
() Your OC has black and red in their design.
Yes.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
What's that?
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
They can use shadow clone!
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
Nope.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
Fuck no, Earth ponies suck.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
They're more generous than Rarity.
() Your OC is a smoker.( Mm-hmm, Late Shift is a smoker.)
Never even smelled smoke before.
() Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them ( Forgetful can't fly too high because she gets vertigo, loses balance and crash lands everytime she flies, she has to walk everywhere usually late for her jobs.)
Nnnnnope.
() Your OC's cutie mark is something lame ( Forgetful's is a Photo album surrounded by ? Marks, and Late Shift's is an old fashioned clock with a half moon to the side of it, I think they're cute but let me know if they're lame.)
It's an awesome Cutie Mark.
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points) ( I've had Forgetful drawn multiple times.)
... Okay, maybe.
All jokes aside, I also wanted to share this little gem that someone created and apparently they were serious about it.
Name ¢€¥¢∆¢€¥¢∆¥¢ (a mortal can't even comprehend her real name
Alias: Alice Mother Of The Multiverse
Displaced As: N/A
Gender: female
Race: 1 MILLION. Tailed Kitsune
Age:Infinite
Personality: Motherly to everyone but if proven guilty of crimes she's a demon who'll obliterate all hope of being not guilty (she'll check to make sure your not framed ) has multi personality disorder that is were the demon is along with personalities of time and space
Likes: children sweets couples hero's who don't think for themselves
Dislikes: Crime and people who think they can be unstoppable and arrogant people who think them above others
Morality: patient and motherly severely smart from all the time she was alone in the time in the void waiting for the multivers to grow
FoC: heroes
Wish: to stop with the destruction of her child the multivers (she literally gave birth to it)
Wish Outcome: it does stop for a while but universe's do still get destroyed by natural causes
Powers: Mother Knows, Best able to make anyone Wilt with her blade is if a Scolded Child
Imagination is Power. anything she wants to to use it'll be given to her in either as a "coincidence" or appears in front of her
Universe's Mother. The very universe she's in will bend to her if she asks it to do something
Equipment: N/A as she has Infinite everything For her stats
Strengths: The very universe bends to her well
Weaknesses: She can be overly concerned about the injured to the point of babying them and when the demon personality is out she doesn't care of what is around her when it does battle PS i know she's one of the most overpowered OC she's my only one i almost got her in a war before but admins said she to OP it's up to i if you wish to downgrade her stats and i don't know what to do with planning with others so I'm sorry in advance for any thing i say i just want to have her in a war or story