I feel like my writing is lacking in some places but I'm unsure of which areas need the most work. So though I would ask what need the most improvement.
The story will replace Away from Home but is set outside the school of friendship and a few years after the young six have graduated. It should be ten chapters long, with each chapter being between 2k to 5k words. If your interested pm me.
After a time away from the story, the holes and mistakes became clear. The plot got off track at some point, and I was lazy with showing character actions and motives. So I will be fixing it, changing the theme and moving it forward in time. So if you would like to be a bate-reader for it fresh start let me know.
I feel like my writing is lacking in some places but I'm unsure of which areas need the most work. So though I would ask what need the most improvement.