Chapter 2 Revamp... Now With 20% More Starry! · 3:09am Jul 27th, 2018
Hey everypony, just here to let you all know that the edits and revisions for chapter 2 are now finished and up on the site. Just like with the first round of updates, expect fixes to both both paragraph structure and streamlining, to make reading a bit easier, as well as some corrections to basic factual errors (Luna speaks in Early Modern English not in Middle English). However, this time around, I've re-added a scene I had cut between Starry and Matthias that highlights both her character and her dynamic with Matthias. Originally, the two were going to have a small conversation during Night Court, but I felt it was cutting into the time I needed to develop Luna and May's dynamic in an already overly long chapter. Then I go and write a 66K word chapter for Twilight and realize I had no bucking excuse.
So give it a re-read if you'd like, nothing has been added or taken away that conflict with what you have already read, and tell me if you like it, or if you don't, as always your input and voice really helps me as a writer!
Have a wonderful weekend!!!
Eeexcellent. I honestly look forward to rereading this. GOD the Twilight chapter was SO BLOODY GOOD!