Planning on Revision (Pfft already!)

When I first wrote this prologue, I wanted to have some fun with it. Turns out that's not something that someone would want to read. The pre-reader I have is a friend so I could see why he would think it's funny. It's pretty much his buddy wailing on his own fanfiction. For strangers it might seem weird or feel wrong. I completely understand this now and it took a couple people to teach me that. I thank them for that.

All in all I'll try to at least continue with Chapter 1 for now. I'm still gonna try keeping it a parody of "Twixie fanfictions" (Which was my original intention) but I want to take most of my intrusive commentary out. I should be able to work around it without any problem. Might just take a bit to get scenes to flow more smoothly but keep the same pace.

I just wanted to thank the people who did read it and left a comment, giving their support. I really do appreciate it and I hope to improve the story so that it has the comedy I want but less of the side comments that readers wouldn't like.

Until next time,

Dash