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Makitk


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  • Wednesday
    The return to Josey

    And thus begins Josey's second part.

    I'm sick in bed, so excuse me if I made mistakes in this new chapter. I'm sure you'll comment on it if you find them. I'll fix them when I feel better again.

    Also, that other site is giving me grief so if you're waiting for an update there tell them to stop booting my session all the time.

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  • Monday
    April done.

    So that was the last chapter for April.
    The last few chapters of her story didn't quite want to roll out as fast as I wanted them to, and led to an unsatisfactory conclusion in my opinion.
    Fortunately there's Josey's next chapter already half-finished on drive to look forward to. I'll post it as soon as it's done.

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  • 1 week
    tableflip

    Chapter doesn't want.
    Words don't sentence.
    Make story zoom? No.
    Try again later.
    :raritydespair:

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  • 2 weeks
    Halfway point.

    Okay, today's chapter update puts us at the halfway point for April's story.
    I've got 12 chapters in the works for her, as I did for Josey and Spritelight before her.

    Next stop; Yellowstone. :pinkiehappy:

    (Also, yes; I am writing them as I update them... I have depleted my buffer. :twilightsheepish: )

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  • 2 weeks
    Daily updates so far.

    I've been on a roll with regards to Spritelight this week, so I've been pushing updates for it every day so far.

    I hope to return to Pearl's Travels 2, Windcatcher, and eventually Fuu sometime soon as well, but I finally have the feel for Spritelight's continued story and need to get it onto digital paper while I do.

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May
1st
2024

Chapter 14 · 6:53am May 1st

So I'm having a couple of paths the story can branch out to from the events laid out in Chapter 13.
I've got both a 'good' and 'bad' path written out, and both seem equally possible at this point.

I'm writing out the events following for both, seeing which way works out better, but I did say in a previous blog post that progress would be slow.
Right now I'm leaning toward the 'good' path but the 'bad' path would open the story up to more engaging scenes.

Trying very hard to avoid obvious deus ex machina.

Give me some time. Hopefully it won't be years again before the next update. :twilightsheepish:

I've also corrected a few mistakes which I found while refreshing my memory of the story's events up to this point. A few chapters were ever-so-slightly changed. Hopefully for the better.

Let me know if you spot anything in my stories which looks 'off'. I might miss the occasional glitch on my own if it's not pointed out to me.

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