[OG] Chapter Three - Walking on the Lonely Road
This chapter has yet to be rewritten, and is only semi-canon in the Titans' Orb storyline.
Should you wish to read on, please be aware that the writing quality is poorer, and that many scenes, plot elements, and lines of dialogue are subject to significant changes.
The rewritten chapters will be uploaded as and when they are ready.
That is all. 
- Mister Horncastle
Blank space in prep for the rewritten Chapter Three.
Move along to Chapter Four to read this old one.
Oh, and go drink some water, I bet you haven't had enough today. 
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More chapters please !!!
Hah, I get the reference with the title! Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day
7343164 hehe, like 60% of my book is made up of hidden references
Finally. Seems that in the next chapter the group will confront Twilight once and for all.
Okay, Twilight's officially jumped the shark here:
1. She's abruptly null-and-voided any and all seeming character-development regarding her treatment of Callum.
2. She's actually kneecapped her and her friends' chances of saving their home world, just out of personal spite toward one guy -- whom, BTW, has proven her wrong about him over and over again.
I'm just about ready to officially enter her into the Scrappy section of TV Tropes.
Twilight stop ruining my dreams
This was a great chapter, and it seems Callum's made a new friend. I don't have much to write down but, all I can say is this was honestly good.
ImSorryButAtTheSameTimeImNotForLikingTheCliche
7343164 don't you mean 'boulevard of broken dreams'?
In this chapter alone, Bunnie seems like such a sweet character! I hope she stays in the story and isn't just a temporal character.
I ship them! I SHIP THEM I SAY!
(“Could today get any worse?”
I jumped as a loud ‘BOOM’ sounded off in the clouds and a flash of white light appeared in the sky as the thunder began to start.
“Sorry I asked…” I mumbled.)
Natured replied wtf do you think you are doing asking that kind of question
Nooooooo.
I'm sorry, but if you take two whole weeks to walk across Portugal that's walking at a snails pace, it's a tiny country, the average person could walk it in 5 or 6 days at most, and it's super densely populated, with very cheap public transport, it's kinda ridiculous he would have such a hard time crossing it
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Yeah this was written half a decade ago when I didn't know better, I've slowly been remastering the original story along with making small corrections and edits in this one as well.
Thanks for you comment, I've since edited the text to make it a bit more believable.
Damn, that's impressive
"Drug Cartels, why is it always a fucking drug cartel? Can't one of these Orbs just land at someone's Nan's and we can just sit down and have a nice chat over Tea? But no, we get Vaas' long lost twin brother fucking literally, and now another trafficking dickhead who happens to be a child abuser on top- Granted, it's probably better than the fucking Zomrads- Anyway, Patricide, how do we go about it?"
"What? Orbs? The fuck is a Zomrad? Are you off?"
"I mean at this point, I've been severely traumatized and I've had a Scot yapping in my brain for about a month now so probably, yes. Anyway,I think we were discussing Patricide, we should get back to fhat, sounds plot relevant"