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Feb
15th
2017

It came to my attention just yesterday that no less a fandom luminary than ObabScribbler, accompanied by fan voice actress Gina M., recorded a podcast of a highly in-depth critique of my story White Out. I'm somewhat embarrassed to say that its release eluded my normally Sauron-like vigilance (I guess he had his blind spots too - happens to the best of us). Future oversights of this sort will be avoided via the appropriate following and subbing.

There are a few things I'd like to say regarding this matter. First off, many thanks to ObabScribbler and Gina M. for taking the time to undertake such a thoughtful and fair analysis of what many found to be a challenging (and in some cases, infuriating) story. I consider it an act of bravery for them to have delved into it despite the sharply divided response it elicited. Their commentary deftly covered many of the questions, concerns and doubts that the readers had voiced, and I greatly appreciate the seriousness with which they handled it. As I consider it bad form to "defend" my writing against honest criticism and responses, I will not be addressing their deliberations (directly). Nor will I overtly discuss what the story means. I encourage any who are interested to view their video, as they touch on important themes.

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Parallel

Forever






One drawback to wearing

The One Ring

is that it makes having conversations

challenging.






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Sad Luna

Triumphant Villains

and

Defeated Heroes

They will not be at peace until they are fully reconciled.

Any who are able to end their suffering, should.

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#75 · 7w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2409871

It was very convincingly written. You created a situation in which Celestia believably killed someone. Very difficult to pull that off, IMO. Also, there's something that strikes me as fundamentally sound about humans and ponies being unable to coexist, whatever the reason. Great style overall, too. :rainbowdetermined2:

#74 · 7w, 3d ago · · ·

Thanks for adding End of Humans to you favorites! Glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

#73 · 12w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2385012

110% Permanent Scarring Satisfaction Guaranteed

#72 · 13w, 19h ago · · ·

Deathscar for Cutie

#71 · 14w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

*noms happily on you*

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