Thanks for the post mate, but I would appreciate some feed-back. Was the final part of the chapter too gory, or did it fit well for a scene to illustrate Rarity's sanity crumbling?

Is it just me, or is your avatar supposed to look subtly evil?

And thanks for the fave on The Luna Cypher, too!

Thanks for the fave on The Celestia Code! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Go ahead and like it, somebody else already ruined my leet!

Thank you so much for favoriting my story!