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2238592 No problem, keep up the good work.

Thanks for the fav!:moustache:

70707
well for one thing it is one of the few stories that i actually reread
things i like about it, the main character because who doesn't like a good scare now and then, the hp lovecraft feel i get from it, and the fact that the "human" doesn't instantly know all about the world and doesn't go buddy buddy with the main six, good to see some change
things i didn't like so much, seems a little fast past at times, the scenes where he scares something or when he's having a dream are fine but the part inbetween the scenes feels a little fast, and the wait between chapters is a bit of a bummer too
besides that i can't really say i mean the 6 chapters you have are great character builds but i still don't know the main plot of the story yet so i can't really go full critic on it
so in all i like it and hope to see more soon.

70669
Well, thanks anyway for finding and enjoying my fic! Any points that you liked or disliked that you would care to note for me? I'm always looking for feedback.

70644
I found it way back when they give links to other stories when you clicked on a story description
still wish they kinda did that, really helped to find some of the stories that didn't get as much screen time

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