I like the emotion that it gives. regret, sorrow, and love. its hard to find things that effect the heart like your story does. I hope that you continue the story so that i can see how much more passion you can put in to it. Don't change anything because of one readers opinion, put time into your stories and wait till you think its done. 1647414
Thanks for reading my thing. I'm glad you liked it.
I like the emotion that it gives. regret, sorrow, and love. its hard to find things that effect the heart like your story does. I hope that you continue the story so that i can see how much more passion you can put in to it. Don't change anything because of one readers opinion, put time into your stories and wait till you think its done.
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Thanks for adding my story Forever in your heart to your favorites. I'm curious what you liked about it
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