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Well, it saw what it was, tried to explain the situation, and gave a good celestial monologue. It didn't stick out its toes, and I feel that it didn't overstay its welcome. A good story. I would say that the ending felt a bit rushed, and didn't solve the underlying problem, but that is more personal preference then actual critique.

Thank you for adding Baby Pictures to your favorites! Feedback is always appreciated!

Finally the watchery! Was wondering when this would happen. Glad it has though, thanks!

Thank you for the fave on Derailed!

Thanks for adding The Candy Maker to your favorites.