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Sundancer


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Thanks for the fave. :moustache:

It just occurred to me that approaching you via PM may have been rather rude of me and for that I am sincerely sorry; I'm still learning my way around doing this sort of thing.

As I said, if you aren't interested in working on the story please just say so, that's perfectly fine,
If you are interested I also realized I didn't explain what I needed help with on the story front. Again, sorry.

My main concern is grammar and spelling. Followed by the characterization of Celestia 7 Amira in the early scenes and a bit of Cadence at the end, that's all in the early and final scenes. I'm also concerned about scenery/action/dialogue descriptions, as i'm a bit worried I didn't put enough personality or clarification into some scenes or the characters. I left some notes on the Googledoc as well.

As I said though, i'm sorry if i'm bothering you and will stop if you ask me.

i hope he gets better soon :fluttercry:

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