What can I do to make my stories better? · 3:33pm Mar 20th, 2015
When you try and try and try and no matter how hard you try you can't make a decent story what do you do? Well I have hit this roadblock for quite awhile now. I have made what I think is a pretty interesting series known as MLP Civil war, but out of the two chapters I have made I got 9 dislikes so far. The reason I am upset is because I have only 2 likes. No one comments stating why it's bad they just give me a thumbs down and expect me to understand what I did wrong. Is it the grammar?