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My Reviews · 3:41am Nov 24th, 2016

So, yeah, I've stopped reviewing outside of Seattle's Angels, but this is still here as an archive.

It auto cropped part of this page, I actually have a table of contents down there.

Winter only: Reviews will typically be 2-3 stories per blog. No schedule, cause I'm too lazy to follow one, but they will come sometime.
Summer only: I basically take summer off. I might blog about something, but don't expect content.


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Well hello! And thank you!

In terms of expansion, I have no idea. I’m not sure how much I would even be able to add without it feeling padded. I will say, though, that I would like to have 1-2 more ponies before Windy’s turn and focus a bit more on her thoughts and reaction to each of them. I’ve also got an idea for expanding that last paragraph into something a little longer and more in-depth. I’m not sure what word count we would end up with here, but hey, those are my thoughts.

Hey there! I saw your entry for the “Flashfic 150” contest and since we’re not supposed to leave reviews there until later, I thought I’d pop over by to tell you I really liked your entry! It was really good. Ever thought of expanding it into a full-length fic?

Thanks for the follow! It was great to meet you at Ciderfest! :eeyup:

Thanks for follow me. XD

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