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I want the fanfic on here I wrote critiqued. Particularly my skills on characterization and ambience (mood setting, descriptions, emotional conveyance, etc). Links below.
37149 wait, your known for being harsh?! But you enjoyed my fan fic...
holy shit, I finally looked at your page and I cant believe you wern't kidding, my fic is on your top favourites!
I assume you cant wait for the sequel?
EDIT: Oh, and I'm adding Discord *cue nerdgasm*
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I want the fanfic on here I wrote critiqued. Particularly my skills on characterization and ambience (mood setting, descriptions, emotional conveyance, etc).
Links below.
FimFic: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25534/The-Refugee
DA (Critique Built In!): http://hazencruz.deviantart.com/art/The-Refugee-Chapter-1-Where-I-End-and-You-Begin-294879383
So far there are two chapters. If you only read one, please be sure to let me know which one it was. (I understand they are a bit long.)
38232 Sure. Just tell me what you want critiqued. Send me a link if possible.
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I am asking for one, if you'd be willing to spare the time. If not, I do understand.